Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 142 "Dawn is Breaking"Romantic Tanka Poems
13 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Oh I loved this Tanka, Marival, Amiga Mia.. it's beautifully written and a joy to read your pivot line is hard to find as one part flows into the next. Just as it should be. Besitos, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Oh I loved this Tanka, Marival, Amiga Mia.. it's beautifully written and a joy to read your pivot line is hard to find as one part flows into the next. Just as it should be. Besitos, Ulla xx
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you, guapa. I am happy you like this tanka. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Dawn is my favorite time of the day. I am pretty sure it's the most special part of the day. Love would bloom at that time of day. Thank you for sharing this special package with us.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Dawn is my favorite time of the day. I am pretty sure it's the most special part of the day. Love would bloom at that time of day. Thank you for sharing this special package with us.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Barbara. I am happy you like this tanka. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is stunning. A regal Tanka of unique beauty and appeal. It's haunting in imagery and verbiage and the presentation id outstanding.
I live that red poppy!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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This is stunning. A regal Tanka of unique beauty and appeal. It's haunting in imagery and verbiage and the presentation id outstanding.
I live that red poppy!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much. I love red poppies too.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Nice presentation. You have such a great way of displaying your images and poetry. When a person starts writing, we always ponder on the
the theme of the poem. It looks like yours come natural for you.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Nice presentation. You have such a great way of displaying your images and poetry. When a person starts writing, we always ponder on the
the theme of the poem. It looks like yours come natural for you.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from Ricky1024
Another beautiful addition to your Tanka Collection Book.
Nice artwork stands out vividly.
Rich in Theme design and Imagery.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Another beautiful addition to your Tanka Collection Book.
Nice artwork stands out vividly.
Rich in Theme design and Imagery.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Skilful, atmospheric tanka verse beautifully presented with good depth of emotion and meaning. You're safely within the syllable count and your transition within this limited verse form is smooth and flowing. Well done! Take care, Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Skilful, atmospheric tanka verse beautifully presented with good depth of emotion and meaning. You're safely within the syllable count and your transition within this limited verse form is smooth and flowing. Well done! Take care, Debbie
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written Gypsy, and a classic, as you blend the colours beautifully together, and your excellent short poem, has a depth of message that most longer ones Don't, well done, blesskngs Roy
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Beautifully written Gypsy, and a classic, as you blend the colours beautifully together, and your excellent short poem, has a depth of message that most longer ones Don't, well done, blesskngs Roy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Well done
Comment from lyenochka
This is a lovely tanka poem which makes the love bloom like a sun rise. And your choice of pictures and font colors give the reader the sense of the growing love. Nice use of metaphor, too!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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This is a lovely tanka poem which makes the love bloom like a sun rise. And your choice of pictures and font colors give the reader the sense of the growing love. Nice use of metaphor, too!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you are having a wonderful day.
Love,
MariVal ❤️
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Gypsy, I enjoy any poem that quotes a line from B. Dylan despite not fully grasping the intended meaning behind the words. What is the object of your affection in this poem? If I was to read this without the accompanying photos I'd say this is a poem about a lover leaving in the morning, his/her leaving makes you sad but it also makes you recognize how much you care for this person. Am I on the right track?
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Gypsy, I enjoy any poem that quotes a line from B. Dylan despite not fully grasping the intended meaning behind the words. What is the object of your affection in this poem? If I was to read this without the accompanying photos I'd say this is a poem about a lover leaving in the morning, his/her leaving makes you sad but it also makes you recognize how much you care for this person. Am I on the right track?
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Yes, you are right, it's a love poem, most tanka poems are. I was thinking about Bob Dylan song, so you are right again. There is something about that's very poetic. I love his music, he is not just a singer, he is a poet, probably the best one of our generation.
Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a great tanka, Gypsy. This was definitely a poem of loss love. The words showed that you definitely suffer. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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What a great tanka, Gypsy. This was definitely a poem of loss love. The words showed that you definitely suffer. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. Blessed be, Aryr.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
