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The Loser

It was long ago.

51 total reviews 
Comment from redlemurick
Exceptional
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I have this convo to myself every time I enter a contest. Maybe that's why it registered with me, plus the self-deprecating humor and names I recognize on the winners podiums. I have a similar humor and appreciate the vulnerability that goes with it; however you actually feel about yourself with entering these contest. I remember... literally yesterday entering a Senryu thinking the same thing... "maybe I don't spend on this one I got no votes on the last one LOL" :) Good luck either way enjoying to read and relate to! At least.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
    LOL, thank you for the six stars, and for knowing it is just for fun!
Comment from Raul1
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I think you are on your way towards winning this contest. You are winning check the standings for you know it to be true. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good luck!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much, but the contest is secondary to fun of writing the story.
Comment from Ulla
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Hahaha, I loved it. What a lovely entry. I found it highly entertaining. Indeed what is there to lose? You have a good chance of winning this one. Good luck, Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
    LOL, thank you very much, the real fun was in the writing.
Comment from MissMerri
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I found this to be fun and amusing. I love self-deprecating humor and this certainly filled the bill. I do hope it does well in the competition. Especially after you spent a fortune promoting it. ð???

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
    Lol, thanks for reading, the promotion was just part of the fun twist, the fun for me was in the writing, not the contest.
Comment from lyenochka
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I rarely get to review the top page unless it's in a contest that I rarely review. But now that I read this, I can assure you none of those listed would laugh "at" you. If anything, we would laugh *with* you for coming up with this humorous take on the challenge, and even promoting it astronomically. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
    LOL, you do know it is all fun, and not about winning a contest! And the promotion was the twist on the story. Thanks for reading.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I hope you were just saying this for the entry, but I would truly hope nobody on this site would laugh at anybody's writing. If they do, they should not be on the site because it's a learning experience. Anyway, I enjoyed reading and feel you have a good shot at this.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
    Barbara, it was all offered tongue in cheek. It struck me as a funny way to look at the contest. I did get one condescending review. I guess he didn't see the humor. Thanks for reading...it really is not about winning a contest., It was about having fun writing the story.
Comment from jmdg1954
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I like the premise to your story and the back snd forth banter you have with you snd that person in the mirror.

Best of luck in the contest. You should go well!

John

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much!
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

yep, a contest for losers, like all those losers who made the Olympic finals only to not get a gold medal...

Comparing ourselves to other writers is a complete and utter waste of time. It's self-defeating. Mind you, name-checking writers is always a good way to gain some recognition - pandering always works.

As does paying out a ridiculous amount of money that costs more than the contest pays out, all for a stupid digital ribbon that means nothing...

Best of luck to you
GMG

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023

Comment from Wendy G
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Hey, I would never laugh at you!! But you do have to decide also if it is a good thing to win the losers' contest. Would you really want that? Anyway I am a big loser- I lost my phone wallet with all my cards and ID more than two weeks ago and I'm still sorting out the ensuing mess. Better to lose a contest. Anyway, I love your entry! And I definitely won't laugh at you.
Wendy

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
    Oh go head! LOL, Thank you.
Comment from LisaMay
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Losing a contest for losers does sound rather funny, but no one will be laughing at you... those good writers will be jealous that you were able to write about this topic and they weren't allowed to, if they won in the past month. I'm pleased you took advice and kept the word count down, because you didn't mess it up at all! May you soon be wearing a winner's grin again.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much.