Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Playtime"A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
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Comment from DeboraDyess
Gene, you reminded me of so many special moments from my own childhood! What a gift - thank you.
I didn't see any issues with this poem. It was delightful.
Our daughter informed us that we're not allowed to buy toys for our new granddaughter. She doesn't want the clutter. Sure... We'll see about that! We all deserve these kinds of memories.
And she deserves some payback for all the Barbie shoes I stepped on when she was a kid! lol
Blessings, my friend,
Deb
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Gene, you reminded me of so many special moments from my own childhood! What a gift - thank you.
I didn't see any issues with this poem. It was delightful.
Our daughter informed us that we're not allowed to buy toys for our new granddaughter. She doesn't want the clutter. Sure... We'll see about that! We all deserve these kinds of memories.
And she deserves some payback for all the Barbie shoes I stepped on when she was a kid! lol
Blessings, my friend,
Deb
Comment Written 03-May-2023
Comment from lyenochka
That's a fun poem listing all those well known toys. It sounds like the floor of my grandchildren's bedrooms. It is a wonderful and creative thing to play. Best wishes in the contest!
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That's a fun poem listing all those well known toys. It sounds like the floor of my grandchildren's bedrooms. It is a wonderful and creative thing to play. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-May-2023
Comment from patcelaw
It seems that children today have toys toys everywhere. So many toys and yet they seem to be bored at times because they don't know what to do. So what do they do they go get a cardboard box, a spatula out of the kitchen and just have fun with those things. Patricia
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It seems that children today have toys toys everywhere. So many toys and yet they seem to be bored at times because they don't know what to do. So what do they do they go get a cardboard box, a spatula out of the kitchen and just have fun with those things. Patricia
Comment Written 02-May-2023
Comment from shelley kaye
this was a great fun poem!
i liked the refrain
and the different monorhyme for each stanza worked well
quick, easy, and smooth flow
one suggestion i have is maybe try a plain white background to blend with the cool pic? just a thought
great job! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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this was a great fun poem!
i liked the refrain
and the different monorhyme for each stanza worked well
quick, easy, and smooth flow
one suggestion i have is maybe try a plain white background to blend with the cool pic? just a thought
great job! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-May-2023
