Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Hello there, my friend.
This sounds so tranquil, making me wish I was there.

Nicely Done!

~Kerry

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

well done! I love the words imagery and beautiful presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Thank you for participating.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I know not if you have been there, but I have, and what you describe is perfectly fine. Didn't see and geishas but their ladies substituted sublimely. Another gem. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You painted an ambient tranquil Japanese scene here full of silky words and fine blossoms Eugene, I enjoyed the experience, especially the meditation, love Dolly x x x x x

 Comment Written 03-May-2023

Comment from DeboraDyess

Excellent

Good morning, Gene.
I had to go look up with this poetic style is and THEN read it again. You did a great job. I love the ease and tranquility of this poem about tranquility. The descriptions are well done and it was a relaxing read.
Thanks again and many blessings!
Deb

 Comment Written 03-May-2023