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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Until You ~ I Never Knew"Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from Regina Elliott
Out of 6 stars, as this is a
6 star poem. A stellar-penned
Christian poem that should
be in a Christian poem anthology. My very best wishes for the contest, and
have a lovely weekend.
Blessings ~
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Out of 6 stars, as this is a
6 star poem. A stellar-penned
Christian poem that should
be in a Christian poem anthology. My very best wishes for the contest, and
have a lovely weekend.
Blessings ~
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Hey Sweetie, and another virtual six means the world to me. Sorry I am so late with my thank you's ..... My vision is getting worse while I wait for the two eye surgeries in June, so if you could send me any extra information about you, I can get it written ahead of them. Thanks again for the kind review my sweet friend.
Comment from lyenochka
I like your spiritual take on the poetry contest and while human relationships can fail, we can be certain that God's love for us is forever and perfect. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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I like your spiritual take on the poetry contest and while human relationships can fail, we can be certain that God's love for us is forever and perfect. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Hi Helen! Thanks so much your your awesome review and comments for Santha's Poem. You so incredibly kind, my dear friend.
Comment from Raul1
This is a well thought out and wonderful poem you have penned for the contest. Excellent work! I have enjoyed reading it. No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
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This is a well thought out and wonderful poem you have penned for the contest. Excellent work! I have enjoyed reading it. No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 06-May-2023
Comment from shelley kaye
a sweet love poem about one's faith
nice word choices
smooth rhyme and flow
question: why use ALL CAPITALS?
if i may make a suggestion, only use capitals where needed
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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a sweet love poem about one's faith
nice word choices
smooth rhyme and flow
question: why use ALL CAPITALS?
if i may make a suggestion, only use capitals where needed
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Awe, I never use caps unless they are really needed, so I waited for someone to bring that up and I am so glad you did.
It was the only possible way I could keep it a secret till the end that I was talking about Jesus.. I wouldn't think of using His name or talk of Him without it capped. So it was the only thing I could do. .. Does that make sense?
And thank you for asking! I really wanted someone to. Lol
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yes, that makes sense! 👍
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Nice photo choice to compliment your words as well. Great overall presentation. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme. Nice photo choice to compliment your words as well. Great overall presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
Comment from nomi338
I am so happy that I still had six stars to award for such a beautiful and moving work of art. Yes, I said work of art. This poem is so well constructed, so awesomely stated and directed, it hits the heart of those who know and understand. Sadly, those who do not know or understand, will miss the target by miles, confused by the intent of the message so clearly stated. Awesome!
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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I am so happy that I still had six stars to award for such a beautiful and moving work of art. Yes, I said work of art. This poem is so well constructed, so awesomely stated and directed, it hits the heart of those who know and understand. Sadly, those who do not know or understand, will miss the target by miles, confused by the intent of the message so clearly stated. Awesome!
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 08-May-2023
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Nomi, you are just about, if not the sweetest man in the whole world. And it may be the loveliest review and comments that I have ever received. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Then honoring me with your six stars, combining the review and lovely words makes this three in one package deal pretty darn sweet. Kinda like the Holy Trio! : ). Hugs to you dear brother!
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You have given me a strong case of the smiles.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Such a lovely poem with a great surprise ending. We were loved by God when we were in the womb, loved now, and loved eternally in heaven. I am way old and have known all my life of His love.
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Such a lovely poem with a great surprise ending. We were loved by God when we were in the womb, loved now, and loved eternally in heaven. I am way old and have known all my life of His love.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a beautiful contest entry filled with sincerity and
love, Mystery Author. The image and color scheme frame
your words perfectly. The rhyme scheme was well done
and an added bonus However, it was your word choices
that set this above everything else. The fact you were
unsure for a long time, then found your faith was well
expressed. Even then, you realized it was something you
would have to work at every day. I loved the line about
never going back or anywhere for that matter alone.
Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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This is a beautiful contest entry filled with sincerity and
love, Mystery Author. The image and color scheme frame
your words perfectly. The rhyme scheme was well done
and an added bonus However, it was your word choices
that set this above everything else. The fact you were
unsure for a long time, then found your faith was well
expressed. Even then, you realized it was something you
would have to work at every day. I loved the line about
never going back or anywhere for that matter alone.
Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Girl, I do not know how you put up with me, but I am so sorry that this is so late. I really am trying to catch up. So thank you from the bottom of my heart for this lovely review, sweet comments and extra stars. I appreciate you so much!
Comment from Sanku
he loves me he loves me not... this is a difficult theme to write about .But you managed it very well using spiritual love .you have absolute certainty that he loves you .That is great...I wish I had a six...******
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he loves me he loves me not... this is a difficult theme to write about .But you managed it very well using spiritual love .you have absolute certainty that he loves you .That is great...I wish I had a six...******
Comment Written 06-May-2023
Comment from Jim Wile
This was a beautiful poem about a great love that you have that has sometimes been in doubt (by you.) It sounds like you came to it later in life after years without it, and still wonder now and then why you are the object of His love. It was so well written with beautiful rhyme and meter and a surprise ending as you reveal the source of your love. Well done! Jim
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This was a beautiful poem about a great love that you have that has sometimes been in doubt (by you.) It sounds like you came to it later in life after years without it, and still wonder now and then why you are the object of His love. It was so well written with beautiful rhyme and meter and a surprise ending as you reveal the source of your love. Well done! Jim
Comment Written 06-May-2023
