Biblical
The Holy Bible2 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
a nice poem about one's faith in one the religious books
i liked the "be kind to your neighbours" line
everyone should be kinder...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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a nice poem about one's faith in one the religious books
i liked the "be kind to your neighbours" line
everyone should be kinder...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the BIBLICAL acrostic contest. It has strong spiritual points. I especially like the last line - Learn to pray to Him everyday.
Slight edit in second line, as shown in ( ).
In your heart, He b(elongs).
Best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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This is a good entry for the BIBLICAL acrostic contest. It has strong spiritual points. I especially like the last line - Learn to pray to Him everyday.
Slight edit in second line, as shown in ( ).
In your heart, He b(elongs).
Best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you for your help and kind review! I have fixed the mistake.
