Wonder Little Wanderer
This was fun to write!39 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading your loop poem and I can see why you enjoyed writing it. Excellent alliteration in the title to start the poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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I enjoyed reading your loop poem and I can see why you enjoyed writing it. Excellent alliteration in the title to start the poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Thank you
Comment from Ulla
Absolutely, I know exactly what you're saying. It happens to me all the time. I'm a prose writer, but almost always the story takes a turn I never planned.
What a great loop poem you have written. All the best of luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Absolutely, I know exactly what you're saying. It happens to me all the time. I'm a prose writer, but almost always the story takes a turn I never planned.
What a great loop poem you have written. All the best of luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Thank you
Comment from Monica Chaddick
You did a great job on this poem. It flows very well, and is enjoyable to read. I love the art work that you chose, also. Keep writing, you have a talent.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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You did a great job on this poem. It flows very well, and is enjoyable to read. I love the art work that you chose, also. Keep writing, you have a talent.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much for this!
Comment from Eleri
This is a well written loop poem. It generally reads well but seems to change tack completely in the middle from 'Mind your own business'. I am not certain what you mean by that change but that is probably me missing something obvious.
Eleri
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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This is a well written loop poem. It generally reads well but seems to change tack completely in the middle from 'Mind your own business'. I am not certain what you mean by that change but that is probably me missing something obvious.
Eleri
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the feedback
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this loop poem contest entry with us. I could tell from reading that you had fun creating this. I didn't need to read the author's notes. The fun showed. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you for sharing this loop poem contest entry with us. I could tell from reading that you had fun creating this. I didn't need to read the author's notes. The fun showed. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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I appreciate this!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very nice. Good work. Though I was taken aback a bit with 'Mind your own business.'
You put me in mind of 'Nowhere Man' by the Beatles
(He's a real no where man, sitting in his nowhere land, making all his nowhere plans for nobody')
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Very nice. Good work. Though I was taken aback a bit with 'Mind your own business.'
You put me in mind of 'Nowhere Man' by the Beatles
(He's a real no where man, sitting in his nowhere land, making all his nowhere plans for nobody')
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
Cleverly written poem in the loop format, with some humour interspersed. And yet there is a serious element as well if one thinks about people who might be suffering from dementia or mental illness who do worry about losing their minds. Best wishes for the Loop contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Cleverly written poem in the loop format, with some humour interspersed. And yet there is a serious element as well if one thinks about people who might be suffering from dementia or mental illness who do worry about losing their minds. Best wishes for the Loop contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The picture is a nice choice.
This poem encourages people to have confidence in what they are doing. Don't be influenced by others or external environment. Be persistent and don't give up,your dream will become true.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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The picture is a nice choice.
This poem encourages people to have confidence in what they are doing. Don't be influenced by others or external environment. Be persistent and don't give up,your dream will become true.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Comment from RobertaLee
Cute poem; it does look like you were having fun! Don't know as I can see this as 'spiritual poetry', but enjoyed reading it. The illustration set the scene for the fun of your meandering from somewhere to nowhere and your journey was well expressed in rhyme with your device of end word/beginning word.
Thanks for the read.
Blessings
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Cute poem; it does look like you were having fun! Don't know as I can see this as 'spiritual poetry', but enjoyed reading it. The illustration set the scene for the fun of your meandering from somewhere to nowhere and your journey was well expressed in rhyme with your device of end word/beginning word.
Thanks for the read.
Blessings
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you
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Thank you
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very nice poem and a fine example of loop poetry good job!
"Journey further to lose my mind." Perfect line! I love it! I understand the feeling you might be going a little bit crazy and all of a sudden. Something happens to give you validation such as life!
This is a great submission I find no issues with grammar Or any aesthetic issues at all? This is a great poem with the gorgeous picture. I wouldn't change a thing about it. I wish you the best flock and hope your night is amazing!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Very nice poem and a fine example of loop poetry good job!
"Journey further to lose my mind." Perfect line! I love it! I understand the feeling you might be going a little bit crazy and all of a sudden. Something happens to give you validation such as life!
This is a great submission I find no issues with grammar Or any aesthetic issues at all? This is a great poem with the gorgeous picture. I wouldn't change a thing about it. I wish you the best flock and hope your night is amazing!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much!
