Reviews from

First Humans

Punished for disobedence.

2 total reviews 
Comment from kahpot
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Excellent, yes, Adam and Eve are a Bible favorite, and you have described their actions so very well in this wonderful Acrostic, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 06-May-2023

reply by the author on 06-May-2023
    Thank you for the read and encouraging review.
Comment from Ricky1024
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This Bible acrostic contest entry was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed Sabbath Sunday.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 06-May-2023

reply by the author on 06-May-2023
    Thanks again for the encouraging review and the six stars.