Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Nice to see Pedro finally enter the Limelight.
With this well written poem honoring our favs.
I have so many.
Mainly females from Monroe to Raquel Welch.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed evening.
Doctor Ricky


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 Comment Written 08-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Marylin Monroe and Raquel Welch were beautiful actressess

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

no wonder i never heard of him... not a game of thrones fan lol

great tribute poem to him!

one thing i noticed in the third stanza - used strong twice so close together - maybe find a synonym for one?

other than that, nicely done!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)




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 Comment Written 08-May-2023

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reply by the author on 08-May-2023

Hey, Shelley,
Thank you for your helpful review, I made that change. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsys hugs