Life's Sweetest Rewards
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Sunset's Lullaby"A collection of life's memorable cherished moments
4 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written Sedoka poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very beautiful and well written Sedoka poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 11-May-2023
Comment from Cathy M
What a gentle poem about the end of our day and also the end of our days. This poem to me feels two-fold. It can mean the end of one day or the golden years of our life. It speaks about both to me.
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What a gentle poem about the end of our day and also the end of our days. This poem to me feels two-fold. It can mean the end of one day or the golden years of our life. It speaks about both to me.
Comment Written 10-May-2023
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a lovely Sedoka poem for the contest. I like the picture you chose, which fits your words well. I especially like the final line. Good syllable counts throughout. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
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This is a lovely Sedoka poem for the contest. I like the picture you chose, which fits your words well. I especially like the final line. Good syllable counts throughout. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 09-May-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine scene painted with words here as the birds return to their nests when the sun fades into night and the colour disappears, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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A fine scene painted with words here as the birds return to their nests when the sun fades into night and the colour disappears, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-May-2023
