The Explosive Tomato
Stuck on an elevator with ...3 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
how lucky for them both. You don't hear many "stuck on the elevator" stories that turn out that fortuitous!. and as she was practicing, she was her natural self. Well done, author, and well done, Jamie. :)
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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how lucky for them both. You don't hear many "stuck on the elevator" stories that turn out that fortuitous!. and as she was practicing, she was her natural self. Well done, author, and well done, Jamie. :)
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from papa55mike
Well, I hope she gets her contract for the new software. This is a wonderfully written story, but please check your quotation marks; you have a few out of place. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Well, I hope she gets her contract for the new software. This is a wonderfully written story, but please check your quotation marks; you have a few out of place. I wish I had a six for you.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Quite interesting story with a good amount of dialogue. The pace is excellent, the dialogue feels real and there is a good twist at the end.
Good luck with the contest!!
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Quite interesting story with a good amount of dialogue. The pace is excellent, the dialogue feels real and there is a good twist at the end.
Good luck with the contest!!
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you.
