True Love
An unlikely relationship7 total reviews
Comment from Aaron Milavec
Good start, but no follow through that would allow the reader "to feel the heat and passion of your lovers."
Good start, but no follow through that would allow the reader "to feel the heat and passion of your lovers."
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
Good start, but no follow through that would allow the reader "to feel the heat and passion of your lovers."
Good start, but no follow through that would allow the reader "to feel the heat and passion of your lovers."
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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I didn't have enough time to mull it over. Thank you.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet , you have 5 votes now.
Yes I am a sucker for black sheep.
I m drawn to dark , damaged souls ..
Wuthering Heights, East of Eden and Hamlet are some of my all time favourites.
I love lots of drama and the main male characters in these three stories are conflicted.
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
Ciao mystery poet , you have 5 votes now.
Yes I am a sucker for black sheep.
I m drawn to dark , damaged souls ..
Wuthering Heights, East of Eden and Hamlet are some of my all time favourites.
I love lots of drama and the main male characters in these three stories are conflicted.
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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You are very kind. I love these classic stories too. Thank you.
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You are welcome ! 😐
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Love sees what others miss. I really like how you have chosen this as your topic for a love poem. There is someone for everyone and it is always beautifully when they find each other. Lovely poem.
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
Love sees what others miss. I really like how you have chosen this as your topic for a love poem. There is someone for everyone and it is always beautifully when they find each other. Lovely poem.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem.
There is someone for everyone. Every black sheep is someone's sun and moon. I love the idea of that.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem.
There is someone for everyone. Every black sheep is someone's sun and moon. I love the idea of that.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We sometimes see something in another person that touches our heart and their history means nothing when we are in love. A fine write, love the sentiments, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
We sometimes see something in another person that touches our heart and their history means nothing when we are in love. A fine write, love the sentiments, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 13-May-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from pome lover
well, it makes one wonder what good qualities he had for her to love. I do think that sometimes a person who's called the black sheep of a family has either been ignored too much or has felt slighted growing up - some reason he turns to negativism.
This doesn't exactly sound like a "passionate" poem to me, but it is an interesting observation - she loves him no matter what.
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
well, it makes one wonder what good qualities he had for her to love. I do think that sometimes a person who's called the black sheep of a family has either been ignored too much or has felt slighted growing up - some reason he turns to negativism.
This doesn't exactly sound like a "passionate" poem to me, but it is an interesting observation - she loves him no matter what.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you for your insight.
Comment from papa55mike
That's all that matters is what the other person sees. Love is truly blind. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
That's all that matters is what the other person sees. Love is truly blind. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you for your kind review.