Reviews from

Come and Get Your Love

Failure is our biggest nemesis.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Mary Shifman
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This story is engaging and kept me hanging on to the very end. It took me a bit to realize that it was a sort of tragic "Groundhog Day" theme. I liked the ending. I hope you win the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

reply by the author on 31-May-2023
    You're psychic, Mary! Thanks for the comments.
reply by Mary Shifman on 08-Jun-2023
    You are very welcome.
Comment from pookietoo
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I don't get this story. Where in your story does it say Captain Cole died. I really need to know before I vote on the story. Take care, smile. Best wishes to you.

Please tell where it says Captain Cole died.

Who is the only survivor?

 Comment Written 21-May-2023

Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is an interesting story for the competition. story lines were clear easy to follow. The emotions and actions of the characters made sense. enjoy your story and it seemed possible. Excellent writing!

 Comment Written 19-May-2023

reply by the author on 31-May-2023
    Thank you, Alexandria!
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 31-May-2023
    You're welcome Michael!
Comment from JT traveller
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I do hope this is the start to a novel! Your descriptions are on point! Very engaging writing. Imaginative, compelling. I absolutely loved it. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 19-May-2023

reply by the author on 31-May-2023
    Thank you for your comments, Jacqueline.