Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A lovely simile - "like a silken scarf." You captured the sensation of a soft and gentle summer breeze, bringing welcome relief from the heat. Congratulations on the win!!

 Comment Written 21-May-2023

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reply by the author on 21-May-2023

Thank you for your sweet words of congratulations.

Comment from elainec4

Excellent

Congratulations on your contest win. I enjoyed reading your work. It's a beautiful image using beautiful words that flow. Your use of alliteration serves you well. Thanks for sharing. elaine

 Comment Written 17-May-2023

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reply by the author on 17-May-2023

Thank you so much, Elaine, for your kind words of congratulations.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I have voted for your poem because I enjoyed the link you made between the breeze and a silk scarf - 'caressing' captures that soft touch so nicely. Plus your choice of image and font also portray movement well.

 Comment Written 16-May-2023

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reply by the author on 16-May-2023

Thank you so much for your vote. I am honored.

Comment from Galileo Berenstein

Excellent

This is a very nice poem. I can really imagine being at the beach with this poem. And I go to the beach very often. You made a really good poem for a 5-7-5 poem.

 Comment Written 15-May-2023

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reply by the author on 16-May-2023

Thank you, Galileo.

Comment from redlemurick

Excellent

Really good and simple; syllable count is right there; image really nice with the color and font style. Maybe it's because I'm outside and a breeze is there with sun but I felt it reading it :) Great job!

 Comment Written 15-May-2023

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reply by the author on 16-May-2023

Thanks so much.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Gentle warm breezes are the order of the day now that the spring is here and summer will follow and I felt that silken shawl on my shoulders here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-May-2023

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reply by the author on 16-May-2023

Thanks, Dolly.