One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You wrote two lovely poems here, both different but with the same syllable count. I love the satori line in the Haiku. I also thought your author's notes were excellent. I keep wanting to learn how to write a Haiku, and I just might do that. Another thing I liked was your presentation, stunning, is the only work that fits. Well done! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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You wrote two lovely poems here, both different but with the same syllable count. I love the satori line in the Haiku. I also thought your author's notes were excellent. I keep wanting to learn how to write a Haiku, and I just might do that. Another thing I liked was your presentation, stunning, is the only work that fits. Well done! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Sandra. I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your haiku and 5/7/5 poem.
I love how you played with the theme shades of colour - 2 lovely approaches.
Great creative presentation also.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your haiku and 5/7/5 poem.
I love how you played with the theme shades of colour - 2 lovely approaches.
Great creative presentation also.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Debra. I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Stunning visual definitions conveying the essence of your author's notes. An excellent and memorable post. This I can see your favourite verse form! Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Stunning visual definitions conveying the essence of your author's notes. An excellent and memorable post. This I can see your favourite verse form! Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Yes, I love Haiku and tanka the best. :)
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this post because it helps everyone understand the difference between a 5-7-5 and the Haiku, which has been confusing on occasions. Your Haiku is full of the wonderment in nature and it is also deeply religious and your 5-7-5 includes a faithful theme as we draw colour from life and create our dreams, both are inventive and enjoyable, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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I enjoyed this post because it helps everyone understand the difference between a 5-7-5 and the Haiku, which has been confusing on occasions. Your Haiku is full of the wonderment in nature and it is also deeply religious and your 5-7-5 includes a faithful theme as we draw colour from life and create our dreams, both are inventive and enjoyable, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Hello, Dolly, I'm not a very religious person but I do believe there's a loving God.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from harmony13
The author's words in both of these poems are lovely! Butterflies are, for
me, a great symbol of life! The first two lines of both poem flow and
connect well. The last lines say it all! I enjoyed the read! The artwork
is awesome and compliments these words.
Hi Gypsy, hope you are doing well!.....Maria
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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The author's words in both of these poems are lovely! Butterflies are, for
me, a great symbol of life! The first two lines of both poem flow and
connect well. The last lines say it all! I enjoyed the read! The artwork
is awesome and compliments these words.
Hi Gypsy, hope you are doing well!.....Maria
Comment Written 24-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Hello, Maria,
It's good to hear from you. Thanks you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Excellent haiku and excellent 5/7/5 poem. Although I have degrees and I've learned a lot in life I can't sto learning more. I love to learn and you made this very clear. I'll probably save it because I love learning, but I have a bad memory. lol
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Excellent haiku and excellent 5/7/5 poem. Although I have degrees and I've learned a lot in life I can't sto learning more. I love to learn and you made this very clear. I'll probably save it because I love learning, but I have a bad memory. lol
Comment Written 24-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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I have a bad memory too :) let me know if I can help.
It's good to hear from you. Thanks you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
It's good to hear from you. Thanks you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from jbannon
Lovely poem! And thank you for helping readers and reviewers understand Haiku. It seems quite technical yet still embodies creative beauty. I'm a writer, not a poet but I am interested in poetry.
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reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Lovely poem! And thank you for helping readers and reviewers understand Haiku. It seems quite technical yet still embodies creative beauty. I'm a writer, not a poet but I am interested in poetry.
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Comment Written 24-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Haiku's rules may be overwhelming at first look but it's not hard. You can star with a simple 5-7-5 poem and work your way up. Our haiku club is a good place to learn.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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You're most welcome :) Thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
God's creativity comes out in the myriad of shades He created even the colors we can't even see with our eyes!
Yes, we can't even know all the shades of our completed lives which He is still painting.
Love the way you described it!
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reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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God's creativity comes out in the myriad of shades He created even the colors we can't even see with our eyes!
Yes, we can't even know all the shades of our completed lives which He is still painting.
Love the way you described it!
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Comment Written 24-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Thank you very much, big sister. I dedicated to you because you are such beautiful manifestation of God creation. You're the most kind, considerate, and intelligent woman I know. You are in touch with God and your prayers are beautiful.
BTW, my friend, James is very sick. He suffers from chronic pain every day but now on top he has a hard case of flue, high fever, chills, aches... could you add him to your prayers? I'm praying too but you are better at it.
Love,
Marival
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I'm not any better than anyone else. God hears our hearts and your heart is beautiful because it's full of love.
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Thank you, sis,
love,
Marival ❤️
