Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, this poem is so sweet an filled with high sensory appeal.

I especially liked:
your my wish upon a star.
(G, the person of my dreams.)

Gorgeous presentation. A pleasure to read. This poem made me smile.
Xo. M

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review , and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I love the ending of you're my wish upon a star. I used to wish upon stars for my soul mate. I prayed, wished and hoped and found him. Beautifully written. You have an uncanny ability to take something that is simple in theory and make it beautiful. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 29-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from aryr

Excellent

What a great tanka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were fantastic, the first picture was the one that showed the girl and the stars, the second showed a shooting star. Your words showed the promise to let the stars be. Great job. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 29-May-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 30-May-2023

Most welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

You defined the 'edge of midnight' in this poem. We know exactly what that point is. Wow! Thank you for this perfect poem. Once again, this is a perfect package. You always deliver.

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 29-May-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review. It means a lot coming from you.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Love the title. It's not a place but a time - the edge of midnight. And yet because it's a time, the "edge" makes it something almost tangible like the "fields full of summer."

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 29-May-2023

Thank you, big sister, I am happy you like it :)

Love,
MariVal

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i like how the second line goes down to make an edge
and i love the last line "you're my wish upon a star"
reminds me of "you're my mariah carey" patrick said to david in schitt's creek lol

nice work - thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

I love Schitt's Creek! Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I like this post dear Gypsy, the softness of night always suggests a hiddenness which is popular with the human mind in some ways, but not others, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 29-May-2023

Well done