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A Lost Boy

A most unforgettable trip

41 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is why I admire you - your strength of character! And you credit your mother, another admirable thing to do! And despite the insult at the restaurant table, you agreed to eat at the kitchen where you met a new friend, the cook.

Those times are shameful and yet, during the previous administration this kind of prejudice was resurfacing due to the racially prejudiced rhetoric of that last president.
So glad that you shared this, Nomi!

One suggestion: to make the prose easier to read, separate the paragraphs with a blank line.

 Comment Written 28-May-2023


reply by the author on 29-May-2023
    Thank you. I am sure I can do that. I appreciate your thoughts, all of them. This is just a chapter from the life story I am slowly putting together.
reply by lyenochka on 29-May-2023
    I'm so glad you are writing your life story!