Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

Lovely............sweet Seynru poem............
and lovely image.....................
When did you win this contest? Because I too won last week...
Lisasview, afternoon here in Spain

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2023

Hey Lisa,
That was a month ago. Yeah I saw your win, smiles... awesome poem!!
Congratulations!!!

reply by Lisasview on 20-Jun-2023

Oh good glad you read it...and enjoyed it... My first try at that form...

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Congratulations on winning the contest! It was definitely a great poem. It was lovely, soft, and romantic. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Thanks so much Jessi!!!

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Congratulations on your well deserved win of the Senryu contest. Your poem has a delightful, uplifting, and romantic flair. Your chosen picture pairs perfectly and intensifies your message. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Thanks so much!!!! Long time I didn't see my poem in the top 3!!!
Appreciate your kind and constructive review !!

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Congratulations on your contest win. It definitely has emotional appeal. Excellent alliteration with the "s" sounds. The description of the smile gives a lovely image. Great idea to compare the smile to sunlight. Continued success to you. judi

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Oh! Judi, I sincerely wish we were ex-aequo, really!!! Your senryu is so deserving too!!! Thank you for your wishes and generous stars!!!
And CONGRATULATIONS TO YOU!!!
Mario

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This is a good entry for the - senryu you - writing prompt contest.
The picture used to enhance this write works well. The words written are loving and tender. Nicely done to a warm way to start the day :-).
Best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Thank you for your positive review!!

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very nice Senryu and you have conveyed love, warmth, and cheer through your words. The comparison of a morning smile with sunshine is lovely. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 31-May-2023

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reply by the author on 31-May-2023

Thanks so much Wendy, for your kind and encouraging review!!!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Good entry for the Senryu You! writing prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images are easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 31-May-2023

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reply by the author on 31-May-2023

Thank you so much Gypsy!!!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This senryu, She is My Sunshine, has the proper formatting and reminds any of us, who wake up next to the love of our life, to go out of our way to remind him/ her of that truth.

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Thanks so much Bill

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

well, that is a whole love poem in three lines, fourteen words.
No more words are needed. That says it all.
Lovely and refreshing, and a very good Senryu.
Katharine

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Thanks so much for your encouraging review...!!!

Comment from Nicki Nance

Excellent

This is a sweet, straightforward Senryu. I hope it reflects your reality. Your presentation feels like morning. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for a great read.

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

I thank you very much for your kind words, Nicki. I read your work a few times, and you did very well in many contests!!!