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Anatomy of Publishing

From idea to published book

36 total reviews 
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I read the original, Terry, and it was great.
I liked this update on the whole process.
While you had to choose another picture, I
don't believe you will want to change it now.
If so, then some of the lines referring to it in
the text would need to be deleted. I found it
disheartening the way the committee talked
down to you about this great story. I wonder
what their credentials are--degrees, awards,
published work, jobs in related fields, etc.
If they talk the talk, then do they walk the walk?
I'm thrilled you went on with your endeavor to
publish.
I wish you much success, Jan

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
    Jan, thank you for your kind comments. Terry.
Comment from lyenochka
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Love your humorous storytelling, Terry! And kudos to you for trying out the feather thing. I tried that once and was so dismayed that I didn't try again. And no, I don't know who's on the committee. I'm so proud of you to get your inspiration into a story, then hire Rama to make it professional and making it up to a 10,000 word book! WOW! I'm looking forward to it. By Christmas, I should be settled in to a new home and having grand kids over to read your book to!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
    Helen, thank you for the stellar review. Terry
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Terry, having read your previous posts, I have no doubt that anything you write is far from amateurish. Constructive criticism would have helped.
I am glad you did not give up but expanded the story, edited it, and asked two of the best writers to review it.
Your determination will no doubt be rewarded.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
    Mary, thank you for the encouragement and support. Terry
Comment from jmdg1954
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Terry. You've made a number of valid points in your post.
Ironic how this committee for the as you put it "feather thing" hides behind there anonymity. It's like sending a nasty text, you f'ing have to see the recipient nor answer them if they respond. Cowards they are.

I've only known you the eight months I've been back on FanStory, and you are a hell-uva writer my friend. And soon to be a published one with your new book.

I intend to search your portfolio for the post you mentioned. I have my five grandkids converging at our house in about three weeks and intend to read it to them and have my two oldest read it themselves. My granddaughter devours books.

All the best and all the luck!

John (we'll celebrate with a little Barrel Bourbon).

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
    John thank you for the six stars and your kind words. The story has been disabled. I have disabled most of my portfolio. I never intended on publishing a book, but this story took a life of its own. I will keep you posted as it develops.Terry
Comment from John Ciarmello
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Hey, Terry! I wish you all the success in the world, my friend.

Unfortunately, there are many reasons the FS community reviews the way they do, but publishing a piece does not come to mind when they read another work. Thus I read for pure pleasure without thinking the writer has publication in mind, and I'm sure I'm not the only one that reviews that way.

You made intelligent choices moving forward with your dream, and I'll be waiting for the good news! Perseverance is key!

Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
    Thanks John. Terry
Comment from karenina
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These six stars are for your humor in the face of some not-very-kind commentary. I do not have personal experience, as I've never had the inkling to submit a request for a golden feather.

The "you let the six stars go to your head" comment seems harsh.

I know you, and know you would not submit any work that you did not personally feel was worthwhile...and you know well the five/six-star situation here.

This, however is not a comment on the process of a committee that remains anonymous. It is about your belief in your work, your wise choice to hire Rama Devi to edit--and the smart selection of your two desginated readers-- Grandmoms know a bit about what their grandchildren like.

I enjoyed your story and told you then I hoped you'd expand upon it and cheered on your idea of publication. I'm looking forward to your book. Please let us know when this available and through whom.

Jot me down on your "buyer's" list. I know Max will love this!

Karenina


 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
    Karenina, thank you for the six stars. As usual I think you have analyzed my adventures in an outstanding manner. You will get a copy. Terry
reply by karenina on 05-Jun-2023
    Yay! Maybe I'll even share it with Max!
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Thank you for sharing your experience with this story. I hope that it is eventually published and does well. We will be looking forward to your post when it publishes.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
    Anne, thank you for your review. I will keep you posted.. Terry.
reply by Anne Johnston on 04-Jun-2023
    You are welcome
Comment from nomi338
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Terry, in my humble opinion, the thing you need most to succeed, you already have, and that is belief in yourself. Experts are proven wrong all the time. There were people who scoffed at the idea of cars taking people over roads of great distances, airplanes flying people over continents, ships taking men to the moon and bringing them back to earth alive and unharmed. Let the scoffers scoff. They may be experts, but they are not infallible. No human on Earth besides Jesus Christ, who has never been wrong or mistaken. I say go for it.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
    I will. And congratulations on the story of the month, you got my vote. Terry
reply by nomi338 on 04-Jun-2023
    Thanks Bro I appreciate it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Please keep us updated. I will buy the book for my granddaughters. I know they'll love it. Thank you for sharing.

The more I thought about it, It became clear that this could be a little book (lower case 'i' on 'it')

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
    Barbara, thank you for reading, I keep you posted. Terry
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I just put my book Miranda Chronicles on the market. Used Amazon. It's honestly not that bad. But I had to edit myself. I also had my daughter to whip up the cover. Honestly, getting the cover to upload was the most difficult. Good luck with this venture. BTW, not that I probably makes a difference, but your writing is awesome. Definitely not amateurish. I always look forward to your posts. Gretchen

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
    Gretchen, thank you for the very kind words! Terry