Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Eugene, wow I have been watching
stories about honey bees this past weekend...

I think it's amazing the way they transfer
them from different places...to peoples
homes who raise them...

I love your poem my sweet friend...and love
the picture...of course I love honey...very
nicely written...so good to see you sweet guy...
love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

Comment from Emerie Mao

Excellent

I enjoyed this poem a lot. It is true to the impact that bees have on our life, like making us honey. It also in a way does describe the process of them making us honey. I hope you have a great day.
- Emerie

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Exceptional

I very rarely give six stars, unless I truly think the work is outstanding. And yours is, really. First of all, the subject matter you picked I an endearing one, everyone love bees and the magical process to make honey. Secondly your words are so appropriate and thought carefully, and most of all, the rhyme is impeccable.
I really enjoyed it.
Liked the last verse too: A world of wonder they do freely impart...

 Comment Written 30-May-2023