Completely Out of Steam
What if people ran out of steam?11 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I'm glad that you didn't quit! And what an important message about all the great men and women in the arts and sciences! They didn't give up. God gave them a spirit of perseverance to complete the mission He had for them. Congratulations on the win!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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I'm glad that you didn't quit! And what an important message about all the great men and women in the arts and sciences! They didn't give up. God gave them a spirit of perseverance to complete the mission He had for them. Congratulations on the win!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you, my friend. "Perseverance" is just the right word!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a clever free verse poem with a strong message showing how great discoveries were made by people who never gave up and worked to finish the job.
A little self-deprecating here that you, unlike these great inventors, are entirely out of steam, and your contribution will not be missed. I am not so
sure, you may not be on the New York Times best-seller list; however, your work here shows that your readers enjoy your musings.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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This is a clever free verse poem with a strong message showing how great discoveries were made by people who never gave up and worked to finish the job.
A little self-deprecating here that you, unlike these great inventors, are entirely out of steam, and your contribution will not be missed. I am not so
sure, you may not be on the New York Times best-seller list; however, your work here shows that your readers enjoy your musings.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Thanks for a lovely review. Your really brightened my day!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
A very interesting piece that I could tell grabbed everyone's attention and were held captivated from the beginning to end of this well thought out and well written piece.
Thanxxxxx for sharing and many blessings to you and your family!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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A very interesting piece that I could tell grabbed everyone's attention and were held captivated from the beginning to end of this well thought out and well written piece.
Thanxxxxx for sharing and many blessings to you and your family!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much--and blessings to you and yours, as well!
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Comment from Julie Lau
Very clever! I like your thinking! I like your verse too. It's great to read something intelligent, amusing and original. Many thanks for your poem, and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Very clever! I like your thinking! I like your verse too. It's great to read something intelligent, amusing and original. Many thanks for your poem, and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your delightful review. You used three of my favorite adjectives to describe my poem!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
An imaginative and well expressed verse which I enjoyed reading. I like the title and the development of your poem in this free verse form and its conclusion is both neat and satisfying. A very worthy entry for the contest and so far my favourite! Good luck Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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An imaginative and well expressed verse which I enjoyed reading. I like the title and the development of your poem in this free verse form and its conclusion is both neat and satisfying. A very worthy entry for the contest and so far my favourite! Good luck Debbie
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I love being a favorite - any time!
Comment from Janel Mock
I love this! Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest! I need to be more positive and this will help me push through! Have a blessed day!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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I love this! Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest! I need to be more positive and this will help me push through! Have a blessed day!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you for a great review!
Comment from Jordyn Meyerson
This is truly incredible! This piece is so well written so beautifully said. I love how each idea is connected to the next and they all tie together so wonderful. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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This is truly incredible! This piece is so well written so beautifully said. I love how each idea is connected to the next and they all tie together so wonderful. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you for a wonderful review! I appreciated it very much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well I am glad you didn't run out of steam with this write and you managed to finish what you had to say here and I enjoyed the journey. We must never give up and keep on expressing ourselves. Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Well I am glad you didn't run out of steam with this write and you managed to finish what you had to say here and I enjoyed the journey. We must never give up and keep on expressing ourselves. Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Still steaming, here! Thanks, dear Dolly!
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I like how your poem is thought provoking. The flip side is, how many paintings, writings, and medical discoveries didn't happen because someone ran out of steam and laid down their pencil, brush, or stopped doing experiments.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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I like how your poem is thought provoking. The flip side is, how many paintings, writings, and medical discoveries didn't happen because someone ran out of steam and laid down their pencil, brush, or stopped doing experiments.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful response.
Comment from Janet Foor
I have (temporarily) ran out of steam a few times in my life. My faith has sustained me and my family and friends. As a Christian, we always have the strength to go on even when we think we can't.
Thought provoking poem.
Blessings
Janet
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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I have (temporarily) ran out of steam a few times in my life. My faith has sustained me and my family and friends. As a Christian, we always have the strength to go on even when we think we can't.
Thought provoking poem.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment Written 01-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much, Janet. My faith, too, is what has kept me going!~
