Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 170 "Your Sad Blue Eyes"Romantic Tanka Poems
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we witness someone's grief, we feel it deeply and you captured their sorrow here perfectly as we are broken inside when we grieve, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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When we witness someone's grief, we feel it deeply and you captured their sorrow here perfectly as we are broken inside when we grieve, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the excellent five stars review and insightful feedback. May you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, descriptive and creative. I found the
poem sad and like how this author compared it to a broken wing. Thank
you for the author's notes - another way to look at the heavy burden of loss. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Gypsy, have a good week!....Maria
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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The author's words are heartfelt, descriptive and creative. I found the
poem sad and like how this author compared it to a broken wing. Thank
you for the author's notes - another way to look at the heavy burden of loss. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Gypsy, have a good week!....Maria
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Janel Mock
I love reading your work. It opens my eyes to new ways to view the world and everyone can use that every now and then. I can't wait to read more of your poems! Thank you for sharing! ~Janel
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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I love reading your work. It opens my eyes to new ways to view the world and everyone can use that every now and then. I can't wait to read more of your poems! Thank you for sharing! ~Janel
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Janel,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ulla
Oh Marival, this is beautiful, and it almost breaks my heart, reading this beautifully written tanka. The sorrow and pain comes through every stark written line. It gave me pause. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Oh Marival, this is beautiful, and it almost breaks my heart, reading this beautifully written tanka. The sorrow and pain comes through every stark written line. It gave me pause. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Ulla,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
This ekphrastic tanka describes the emotion the exuded from the artwork.
I like the dove at the end to show the broken wing fixed,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Hi MariVal,
This ekphrastic tanka describes the emotion the exuded from the artwork.
I like the dove at the end to show the broken wing fixed,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Joan,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Don't mention it, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like the personification of this poem. Yes. A bird with a broken wing will not go anywhere. It's start for a wonderful relationship. Helping each other will establish an unbroken bond.
Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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I like the personification of this poem. Yes. A bird with a broken wing will not go anywhere. It's start for a wonderful relationship. Helping each other will establish an unbroken bond.
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Lisa,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This begs for a back story. Your poem drew me in. I want to know what is going through his mind while he stares off. I want to know what has happened to him, either physically or emotionally that she needs to heal. Great job on this. Beautiful words and imagery. Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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This begs for a back story. Your poem drew me in. I want to know what is going through his mind while he stares off. I want to know what has happened to him, either physically or emotionally that she needs to heal. Great job on this. Beautiful words and imagery. Gretchen
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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With Japanese poetry you often leave the meaning open to the reader.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Blue eyes can be captivating, especially sad ones. This poem is a wonderful reminder that we need to be understanding of each other and help when needed. I think often we just ignore situations. Thank you for sharing this beautiful package with us.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Blue eyes can be captivating, especially sad ones. This poem is a wonderful reminder that we need to be understanding of each other and help when needed. I think often we just ignore situations. Thank you for sharing this beautiful package with us.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Barbara,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. I loved the dual pictures because they showed that the loneliness in the eyes. They also showed the fact that there was also a broken wing. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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This was a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. I loved the dual pictures because they showed that the loneliness in the eyes. They also showed the fact that there was also a broken wing. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Aryr,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy, I enjoyed reading your ekphrastic tanka.
It is beautifully composed and the presentation is lovely. What is it about sad eyes that stir the healing and nurturing instinct in us?
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Hello Gypsy, I enjoyed reading your ekphrastic tanka.
It is beautifully composed and the presentation is lovely. What is it about sad eyes that stir the healing and nurturing instinct in us?
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 03-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Debra
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
