The Power Of Words
Words have the power of life and death. Literally!21 total reviews
Comment from JanPerry
I enjoyed the first paragraph immensely. There needs to be spacing for a new thought or conversation. There's a typo..."You're a fake, a charlatan, (you're)..
should be the next word spelt to denote "you are".
I enjoy the message told. Thanks.
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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I enjoyed the first paragraph immensely. There needs to be spacing for a new thought or conversation. There's a typo..."You're a fake, a charlatan, (you're)..
should be the next word spelt to denote "you are".
I enjoy the message told. Thanks.
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much for your constructive review, Jan... I'll correct asap!!!
Thanks again!!
