Guided by Faith
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Comment from Wendy G
She doesn't need to be embarrassed about calling him during the night, but avoiding him will only draw attention to it. It is strange that she doesn't feel reticent about applying the aloe to his back, in a back room. But I am enjoying your story, and I don't think you need to feel insecure about your writing. It's always good.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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She doesn't need to be embarrassed about calling him during the night, but avoiding him will only draw attention to it. It is strange that she doesn't feel reticent about applying the aloe to his back, in a back room. But I am enjoying your story, and I don't think you need to feel insecure about your writing. It's always good.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from damommy
I don't understand why Emma is so hesitant about Seth. Or why she would apologize for the night before. Calling someone for support when you're frightened is the natural thing to do. As perfect as Seth seems, maybe they just aren't right for each other.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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I don't understand why Emma is so hesitant about Seth. Or why she would apologize for the night before. Calling someone for support when you're frightened is the natural thing to do. As perfect as Seth seems, maybe they just aren't right for each other.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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We'll have to wait and see how this develops. Emma is extremely innocent.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Well, he almost touched her back as they crossed the street. He knows she's feeling vulnerable right now and is considerate of her feelings. I've been a victim of these kinds of "violations", and it takes time to feel comfortable again.
We know they will eventually get together - just don't make us wait so long!!
You said in your author's notes you're never comfortable with your writing. That surprised me a lot. I think your dialogue, especially, is very good.
See you next week.
Pam
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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Well, he almost touched her back as they crossed the street. He knows she's feeling vulnerable right now and is considerate of her feelings. I've been a victim of these kinds of "violations", and it takes time to feel comfortable again.
We know they will eventually get together - just don't make us wait so long!!
You said in your author's notes you're never comfortable with your writing. That surprised me a lot. I think your dialogue, especially, is very good.
See you next week.
Pam
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. It'll be a while before they admit their feelings, but does happen. I like to build relationships, first.
Comment from Sankey
Such a wonderful read. I hope these two get together eventually, even though he is a bit older. You are doing well with this drama/Romance. Nice and long. I don't mind. No spags.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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Such a wonderful read. I hope these two get together eventually, even though he is a bit older. You are doing well with this drama/Romance. Nice and long. I don't mind. No spags.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
It seems that Emma is a lot more reticent after her adventures the day before, and she comes into work a little later than usual, she seems to be avoiding Seth at first, but after awhile she brightens a little and makes her statement later, typing too, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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It seems that Emma is a lot more reticent after her adventures the day before, and she comes into work a little later than usual, she seems to be avoiding Seth at first, but after awhile she brightens a little and makes her statement later, typing too, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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Most welcome
Comment from nomi338
The events you document so well, seem so normal and expected that it is like reading a true story rather fiction. There are few people who can create a story that seems so real. It is really like like looking at real people doing real things. That is a rare gift. It is what makes you a real and true writer.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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The events you document so well, seem so normal and expected that it is like reading a true story rather fiction. There are few people who can create a story that seems so real. It is really like like looking at real people doing real things. That is a rare gift. It is what makes you a real and true writer.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it. HUGS!!
Comment from judiverse
Great description of reactions after the attempted robbery and the threat to Emma. Note to Seth: Let Emma walk across the street by herself. Interesting idea to expand the bookstore. Maybe that would be a good place for Emma--managing the bookstore. Seth's two-fingered approach to keyboarding is like my doctors'. My optometrist was extremely slow. Wonder what Ace found that was so important. I enjoy the addition of the dogs to your story. The chapter moved along just great. judi
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Great description of reactions after the attempted robbery and the threat to Emma. Note to Seth: Let Emma walk across the street by herself. Interesting idea to expand the bookstore. Maybe that would be a good place for Emma--managing the bookstore. Seth's two-fingered approach to keyboarding is like my doctors'. My optometrist was extremely slow. Wonder what Ace found that was so important. I enjoy the addition of the dogs to your story. The chapter moved along just great. judi
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. I think Seth walked her across the street because he wanted to spend more time with her. LOL
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You're welcome. Great work. judi
Comment from Anne Johnston
Another very interesting twist to your story. I feel like Emma is leaning to trust Seth and that he is trying hard to know just how to interact with her. She was brave to face her fears and return to work.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Another very interesting twist to your story. I feel like Emma is leaning to trust Seth and that he is trying hard to know just how to interact with her. She was brave to face her fears and return to work.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review and the understanding.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, aw, me thinks that progress is being made between Emma and Seth. It is a well written chapter and You've set it up well for the next one.
I only found this:
Exhaling(,) Seth said
All best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Hi Barbara, aw, me thinks that progress is being made between Emma and Seth. It is a well written chapter and You've set it up well for the next one.
I only found this:
Exhaling(,) Seth said
All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
This should make a good clean movie if some are still around. Looks as if this romance is coming together. Glad nobody was hurt in the robbery. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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This should make a good clean movie if some are still around. Looks as if this romance is coming together. Glad nobody was hurt in the robbery. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
