Walk me over the rainbow
A lover's fantasy48 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
Hey Willie, that is such a lovely sweet poem that gives us a picture of the kind of person you are. In the process of creating this beautiful piece you have Incorporated linguistic splendor upon your readers. Thanks!
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Hey Willie, that is such a lovely sweet poem that gives us a picture of the kind of person you are. In the process of creating this beautiful piece you have Incorporated linguistic splendor upon your readers. Thanks!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
Comment from nomi338
This is really good romantic poetry. Sounds a lot like Country soaked in prime whiskey, over sparkling ice cubes. Sing it to your favorite honey and then watch what happens next. I am willing to bet, you will get lucky.
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This is really good romantic poetry. Sounds a lot like Country soaked in prime whiskey, over sparkling ice cubes. Sing it to your favorite honey and then watch what happens next. I am willing to bet, you will get lucky.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
Comment from evilynne
What a lovely fanciful romantic poem. It is easy to understand, as love and romance should be. It is enjoyable reading for all ages. The picture is adorable, too. Sorry, I have no sixers to award at this time. Evi
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What a lovely fanciful romantic poem. It is easy to understand, as love and romance should be. It is enjoyable reading for all ages. The picture is adorable, too. Sorry, I have no sixers to award at this time. Evi
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
Comment from BermyBye50
Willie,
This is a lovely well written romantic poem. Your words perfectly express in their simplicity a lover's fantasy. The rhyming is excellent and flows smoothly from one stanza to the next. This would be a contender if it were entered the the love poetry contest.
All the best,
Eugene
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Willie,
This is a lovely well written romantic poem. Your words perfectly express in their simplicity a lover's fantasy. The rhyming is excellent and flows smoothly from one stanza to the next. This would be a contender if it were entered the the love poetry contest.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
Comment from Ulla
Aw, Willie, what a wonderful poem this is and an unconditional declaration of your deep and unwavering love.
It's something that is becoming rarer in the today's world. Ulla:)
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Aw, Willie, what a wonderful poem this is and an unconditional declaration of your deep and unwavering love.
It's something that is becoming rarer in the today's world. Ulla:)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your light-hearted and romantic verse reminds me at time of song lyrics (Beatles?) and couldn't help but make me smile and enjoy the sentiments. Rhythm a bit bumpy second to last line but all forgotten in the overall pleasure of reading. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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Your light-hearted and romantic verse reminds me at time of song lyrics (Beatles?) and couldn't help but make me smile and enjoy the sentiments. Rhythm a bit bumpy second to last line but all forgotten in the overall pleasure of reading. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
Comment from WriterHeather
Oh this is so soft and sweet and captures what love should be. Thank you for sharing this piece with us. It was truly a pleasure to read. I also very much appreciate the presentation
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Oh this is so soft and sweet and captures what love should be. Thank you for sharing this piece with us. It was truly a pleasure to read. I also very much appreciate the presentation
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from Sally Law
Aching for a six for the beautiful, romantic thing. You are a hopeless, romantic, my friend. Thank you for sharing and beautifully so. Sending you my best today is always in my very best for your writing day, Sally :))
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Aching for a six for the beautiful, romantic thing. You are a hopeless, romantic, my friend. Thank you for sharing and beautifully so. Sending you my best today is always in my very best for your writing day, Sally :))
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a beautiful love story, Willie! It tells of what it should be and how simple love is when real love takes hold! I'm happy your arm has healed and you are feeling better. Best, JohnC
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This is a beautiful love story, Willie! It tells of what it should be and how simple love is when real love takes hold! I'm happy your arm has healed and you are feeling better. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A charming, intimate, and perfect love "invitation".
Your presentation is wraps around your words perfectly.
Beautiful in words and presentation.
Best wishes
Mary
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A charming, intimate, and perfect love "invitation".
Your presentation is wraps around your words perfectly.
Beautiful in words and presentation.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
