Walk me over the rainbow
A lover's fantasy48 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Terrific, and I just listened to Vanessa Williams and George Benson sing
"With You I;m Born Again." Made me tear, excessively. Do you know it? Also, sung by Billy Preston and Syreeta.
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Terrific, and I just listened to Vanessa Williams and George Benson sing
"With You I;m Born Again." Made me tear, excessively. Do you know it? Also, sung by Billy Preston and Syreeta.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Willie,
This poem fits its title well. It tells s of what most girls dream of as teenagers about love.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good weekend.
Joan
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Hi Willie,
This poem fits its title well. It tells s of what most girls dream of as teenagers about love.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from Debbie Pope
What an uplifting piece, Willie. Life seems so hard at times. Your poem though addresses all that is sweet in life. It should not be a fantasy. Love is available to all. It's what is good about life.
I enjoyed reading your poem.
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What an uplifting piece, Willie. Life seems so hard at times. Your poem though addresses all that is sweet in life. It should not be a fantasy. Love is available to all. It's what is good about life.
I enjoyed reading your poem.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from Lisasview
Who doesn't love wonderful children poems.... I not only love your poem but your image which I find so perfect for your words.
Yes, love can certainly take you anywhere... You just have to keep your heart open.
Lisa, new to this site
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Who doesn't love wonderful children poems.... I not only love your poem but your image which I find so perfect for your words.
Yes, love can certainly take you anywhere... You just have to keep your heart open.
Lisa, new to this site
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from forestport12
This was good timing, since I'm writing a love story. You nail the most important aspects of romance and true love. I've learned over the years that holding my wife has been a simple yet most powerful message of love than even words. So thanks!
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This was good timing, since I'm writing a love story. You nail the most important aspects of romance and true love. I've learned over the years that holding my wife has been a simple yet most powerful message of love than even words. So thanks!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
Comment from Zoe Webb
I thought this was really sweet. I like the image choice and styling-- sort of sets a more innocent tone. Really liked the second stanza. Nice work and a fun experience.
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I thought this was really sweet. I like the image choice and styling-- sort of sets a more innocent tone. Really liked the second stanza. Nice work and a fun experience.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
Comment from darkmoonbaby
Willie--
Your poem was absolutely beautiful and well written, simply perfection. Is that your handwriting or is that a font? It goes so well with your piece. Did the image spark the poem, or was it pure luck that the image fits so perfectly?
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Willie--
Your poem was absolutely beautiful and well written, simply perfection. Is that your handwriting or is that a font? It goes so well with your piece. Did the image spark the poem, or was it pure luck that the image fits so perfectly?
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
Comment from Alina Clemens
I love love that you incorporated iconic song lyrics into your poem! What is more classically romantic than a love song? It was very fitting and brought a whole level of added nostalgia and connection to your piece. Well done!
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I love love that you incorporated iconic song lyrics into your poem! What is more classically romantic than a love song? It was very fitting and brought a whole level of added nostalgia and connection to your piece. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
Comment from Aussie
Well done. I liked that you spoke from the male point of view (normally it is a female who chases love.) A lovers fantasy it may be but so many think along these lines when looking at a loved one. K xx
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Well done. I liked that you spoke from the male point of view (normally it is a female who chases love.) A lovers fantasy it may be but so many think along these lines when looking at a loved one. K xx
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
Comment from Nicki Nance
Such a pure, sweet, innocent appeal for a loving relationship. The graphic is the perfect fit. Your font choice adds to the lightness. Thank you for the great read.
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Such a pure, sweet, innocent appeal for a loving relationship. The graphic is the perfect fit. Your font choice adds to the lightness. Thank you for the great read.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
