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Walk me over the rainbow

A lover's fantasy

48 total reviews 
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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like this love poem very much. I like the bluesy cowboy poetic feel to it and the reference to the classic song, "Fly me to the Moon". I would add a reference to the somewhere over the rainbow as well but well done as usual.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2023

Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like your opening verse with the rainbow
and flying to the moon.
-You do a good job showing many ways
to show your love for that special person.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2023

Comment from Sanku
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Very romantic as the title suggests The rhymes are so matural the verse flows smoothly .Lovers want continuous attention from their loved ones..very enjoyable...

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2023

Comment from Wendy G
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Beautiful love poem, the sort which reads clearly and well and everyone will relate to. Very nice words, and well composed with good rhyme and rhythm.
Wendy

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2023

Comment from Monica Chaddick
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This is a wonderful piece of writing. Such a beautiful message you have expressed here. The picture is absolutely adorable. I like the font you selected. Your poem flows and rhymes very well. Great job!

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2023

Comment from vpdesignsxo
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Simple and sweet... as love should be! It felt childlike in its simplicity of the words, yet profound in it's meaning. A nice contrast... I like the last lines of the first two paragraphs or versus.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

Comment from Janet Foor
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Your lovers fantasy is sweet Willy. From the artwork and presentation to the very last line, it is Sweet, romantic and a pleasure to read. The sentiment is lovely and you're right, love can take you anywhere. Happy to hear your arm has healed.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

Comment from Goodadvicechan
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What a lovely picture... Rainbow is always pretty and brightens your world.

This is a romantic poem. You've done a good job to bring out the happiness of being in love or be loved.

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

Comment from Raul1
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This poem is interesting and wonder if she will do the same to me. I did enjoy reading this poem piece. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Sweet words of love here Willie and I enjoyed your romantic words and I am glad to hear your arm has now healed, best wishes to you, I enjoyed your poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023