Walk me over the rainbow
A lover's fantasy48 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
like this love poem very much. I like the bluesy cowboy poetic feel to it and the reference to the classic song, "Fly me to the Moon". I would add a reference to the somewhere over the rainbow as well but well done as usual.
like this love poem very much. I like the bluesy cowboy poetic feel to it and the reference to the classic song, "Fly me to the Moon". I would add a reference to the somewhere over the rainbow as well but well done as usual.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like your opening verse with the rainbow
and flying to the moon.
-You do a good job showing many ways
to show your love for that special person.
-Nice artwork and presentation, Willie.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like your opening verse with the rainbow
and flying to the moon.
-You do a good job showing many ways
to show your love for that special person.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
Comment from Sanku
Very romantic as the title suggests The rhymes are so matural the verse flows smoothly .Lovers want continuous attention from their loved ones..very enjoyable...
Very romantic as the title suggests The rhymes are so matural the verse flows smoothly .Lovers want continuous attention from their loved ones..very enjoyable...
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful love poem, the sort which reads clearly and well and everyone will relate to. Very nice words, and well composed with good rhyme and rhythm.
Wendy
Beautiful love poem, the sort which reads clearly and well and everyone will relate to. Very nice words, and well composed with good rhyme and rhythm.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This is a wonderful piece of writing. Such a beautiful message you have expressed here. The picture is absolutely adorable. I like the font you selected. Your poem flows and rhymes very well. Great job!
This is a wonderful piece of writing. Such a beautiful message you have expressed here. The picture is absolutely adorable. I like the font you selected. Your poem flows and rhymes very well. Great job!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
Comment from vpdesignsxo
Simple and sweet... as love should be! It felt childlike in its simplicity of the words, yet profound in it's meaning. A nice contrast... I like the last lines of the first two paragraphs or versus.
Simple and sweet... as love should be! It felt childlike in its simplicity of the words, yet profound in it's meaning. A nice contrast... I like the last lines of the first two paragraphs or versus.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
Comment from Janet Foor
Your lovers fantasy is sweet Willy. From the artwork and presentation to the very last line, it is Sweet, romantic and a pleasure to read. The sentiment is lovely and you're right, love can take you anywhere. Happy to hear your arm has healed.
Blessings
Janet
Your lovers fantasy is sweet Willy. From the artwork and presentation to the very last line, it is Sweet, romantic and a pleasure to read. The sentiment is lovely and you're right, love can take you anywhere. Happy to hear your arm has healed.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
Comment from Goodadvicechan
What a lovely picture... Rainbow is always pretty and brightens your world.
This is a romantic poem. You've done a good job to bring out the happiness of being in love or be loved.
Thanks for sharing
What a lovely picture... Rainbow is always pretty and brightens your world.
This is a romantic poem. You've done a good job to bring out the happiness of being in love or be loved.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
Comment from Raul1
This poem is interesting and wonder if she will do the same to me. I did enjoy reading this poem piece. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
This poem is interesting and wonder if she will do the same to me. I did enjoy reading this poem piece. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Sweet words of love here Willie and I enjoyed your romantic words and I am glad to hear your arm has now healed, best wishes to you, I enjoyed your poem, love Dolly x
Sweet words of love here Willie and I enjoyed your romantic words and I am glad to hear your arm has now healed, best wishes to you, I enjoyed your poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jun-2023