Comment from harmony13

Excellent

I really liked the words above title the "A Lover's Fantasy"! The author's words are engaging, sweet, descriptive, and creative. I really enjoyed reading this poem especially the last stanza which made me smile! Thank you for the author's notes - proof - that love can take you anywhere! The artwork is the cutest! Great Poem!

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job, Willie, with your love
poem. I enjoyed reading it. I agree with you
about the many special 'things' love can do. I
liked the rhyme pattern used. Your words read
smoothly and created great imagery. Great picture.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a delightful love poem Willie, saying all the right things in exactly the right way. Beautifully written my friend, the rhyming's great, the language is romantic, and I'm sure you'll win a heart, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : take me to (a) lovely

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

Comment from Janel Mock

Excellent

I adore this poem! Glad to see you are healed and I hope you continue writing gems like this one. I plan to check more of your work out! Thank you for sharing! ~Janel

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a beautifully written romance poem. Flows nicely with a great rhyme scheme. Love your cartoon world well with your chosen words. Beautuful .

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I am skeptical about love right now, but your poem was sweet and romantic. It makes me wish love really could be forever. Thank you so much for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2023

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Awe. This was so very sweet. I kept getting reminded of songs in each stanza. The way you followed the love from one moment to the next was so adorable. Thank you for posting. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very good time that you have written, and I enjoyed very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I love the presentation that you made the text that you used in the artwork that you used. Patricia.

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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023