Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

the stars in your eyes

illuminate our path home (These two lines are perfect. I didn't think you could possibly do any better and then you add...)

where I'll bask

in the moonlight of your love (It doesn't get any better. Thank you.)

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your kind review and positive feedback. Have a great day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i like the imagery of the stars in her eyes lighting the way home - brings a nice picture to the mind

great poem - thank you for sharing

shelley :)

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thank you, Shelley. :)

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Another sweet love poem with the passion growing from the twinkling stars in the beloved's eyes to the good of moonlight in the love shared between the two.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Thank you, big sister. 😘

Love,
Marival ❤️