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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I enjoyed this fun, nature-filled verse with its quirky little story about this cafe and its furry and feathered visitors. I also liked the fact that your poem covers a whole day giving a sense of nature's interaction and continuity throughout this period. Thanks for sharing and good luck, Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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I enjoyed this fun, nature-filled verse with its quirky little story about this cafe and its furry and feathered visitors. I also liked the fact that your poem covers a whole day giving a sense of nature's interaction and continuity throughout this period. Thanks for sharing and good luck, Debbie
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Thank you and I appreciate that you liked the full day idea.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I love how your back yard provided the inspiration for your imagination to cut loose. Your imagery and personification of the cafe visitors is whimsical, making this a delight to read.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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I love how your back yard provided the inspiration for your imagination to cut loose. Your imagery and personification of the cafe visitors is whimsical, making this a delight to read.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much. You are encouraging.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
What a lovely little poem about life in an animal kingdom café! I think it's a unique perspective and it is so enjoyable to read. The characters are fully developed here and it feels like an ode to nature and the rebirth of a new God-given day!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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What a lovely little poem about life in an animal kingdom café! I think it's a unique perspective and it is so enjoyable to read. The characters are fully developed here and it feels like an ode to nature and the rebirth of a new God-given day!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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I appreciate this review. I am trying to use nature to tie in a more profound idea in a lighthearted way. Thank you for your feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You created a magical scene here with your clever words to describe this as a cafe run by the birds and animals and I enjoyed your poem, a very entertaining piece of writing Michelle, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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You created a magical scene here with your clever words to describe this as a cafe run by the birds and animals and I enjoyed your poem, a very entertaining piece of writing Michelle, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Thank you , Dolly. Bringing enjoyment and a smile was my goal. Thanks for the feedback.
Comment from Lisasview
Reading your poem as the town where I live wakes up. Birds are going crazy with their songs... Love it. Lucky to be around nature.
So of course really enjoyed your poem.
The image you chose is perfect. Love the colors too.
My only suggestions that the fond be a bit bigger. Not that easy to read...
Lisa, new to this site
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Reading your poem as the town where I live wakes up. Birds are going crazy with their songs... Love it. Lucky to be around nature.
So of course really enjoyed your poem.
The image you chose is perfect. Love the colors too.
My only suggestions that the fond be a bit bigger. Not that easy to read...
Lisa, new to this site
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2023
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Glad you are a fellow nature lover. Thanks also for your feedback about the font. I still have to figure this out. Thanks for the feedback.
