Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

I love the unique way you've structured your poem. The structure really adds to the strong words you chose. The stepping down effect really pairs nicely with the feelings communicated.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023

Thank You!

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

That's very cool and I really need layout too very ingenious. Is clever and original great job!
You complied with the contest rules perfectly and came up with a gem!!
Very unique indeed and I find no issues in grammar spelling punctuation or sentence structure. I find no issues aesthetically either. I think it's a great picture of fun read and really well. Put together presentation great job and I wish you the best and have a great evening!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023

Thank You!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh dear, I think we have all been here at sometime in our lives and your six words will bring back some sad memories for some, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023

Thank You!