Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

I love the pairing of the poem with the photo. I like your word choices in this poem and the order you put them in. I wish you the best of luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023

Thank you Andrea. I appreciate the stars and the specific comments. It really helps.

Comment from Eleri

Excellent

This is a simple little poem that really does highlight unusual friendships.It has the required number of words for the competition and does give a cute description. Good luck with it
Eleri

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Amazing image and a very fitting compact verse in this 6 word form. Personally, I think it would read better in the present to bring the whole presentation vividly to life and current - Sparrow (makes) friends with dog - perhaps because you feel the bird has just landed. Good luck in the contest. Debbie

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023

Thank you and that is a great tip.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a very unusual picture and the dog is curious and the sparrow is uncommonly unafraid, not sure how long this friendship will last, but it is a unique moment captured here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023

Maybe a precursor for world peace?Hahaha