Bamboo Geste
woodland whispers and adventures bold10 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Congratulations on your win. I can understand why you won. This is a marvelous and well written story of a cat (and a lesson for us humans) of the need for the love and comfort of home.
Best wishes
Mary
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Congratulations on your win. I can understand why you won. This is a marvelous and well written story of a cat (and a lesson for us humans) of the need for the love and comfort of home.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lobber,
This is a well told story about going after adventure and how it can bring on yearning for home. Adventure can be good for a change, but love and home is the best place of all. Peace is found in sharing times with loved ones with or without words.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
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Hi Lobber,
This is a well told story about going after adventure and how it can bring on yearning for home. Adventure can be good for a change, but love and home is the best place of all. Peace is found in sharing times with loved ones with or without words.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
Comment from LJbutterfly
Congratulations on your well deserved win. You told a compelling story about the adventures of a cat, but included a message for all mankind. Your rhymes flowed easily and the story was cleverly executed. Well done.
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Congratulations on your well deserved win. You told a compelling story about the adventures of a cat, but included a message for all mankind. Your rhymes flowed easily and the story was cleverly executed. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
Comment from Theresa Honnigford
This was very well written. The story draws the reader in and holds one's attention. The artwork is excellent. Well rhymed. Good message. Great work. Thanks, Theresa H.
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This was very well written. The story draws the reader in and holds one's attention. The artwork is excellent. Well rhymed. Good message. Great work. Thanks, Theresa H.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
Comment from Contests
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Jer... this is really good. Your writing flowed effortlessly with wonderful rhyme choices and a heartfelt message. So well done and I wish you luck, my friend. A stellar write.
Melissa
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Hello Jer... this is really good. Your writing flowed effortlessly with wonderful rhyme choices and a heartfelt message. So well done and I wish you luck, my friend. A stellar write.
Melissa
Comment Written 20-Jun-2023
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice set up and presentation,
Bamboo has learned his lesson that there us no place like home. It's a lot harder and less scary.
Being able to curl up in Danikkes lap for comfort helps him relax and his eyes tell of the things he's been through while gone.
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Nice set up and presentation,
Bamboo has learned his lesson that there us no place like home. It's a lot harder and less scary.
Being able to curl up in Danikkes lap for comfort helps him relax and his eyes tell of the things he's been through while gone.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
The simple joy of a cat finding a home and a person gaining a cat.
I really like how you approach the subject in this poem. The story you told within is very good and very clever! I like the feline's plea at the end it's very appropriate! I see no issues with grammar spelling or choice or sentence structure. I also find it aesthetically pleasing with that really need profile of the cat. That's a great submission don't I hope you have a grand day!
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The simple joy of a cat finding a home and a person gaining a cat.
I really like how you approach the subject in this poem. The story you told within is very good and very clever! I like the feline's plea at the end it's very appropriate! I see no issues with grammar spelling or choice or sentence structure. I also find it aesthetically pleasing with that really need profile of the cat. That's a great submission don't I hope you have a grand day!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2023
Comment from JT traveller
Fabulous. Great meter makes the poem flow effortlessly. You tell an incredible story. I thoroughly enjoyed it and awarded you six stars for your effort. Thank you. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Fabulous. Great meter makes the poem flow effortlessly. You tell an incredible story. I thoroughly enjoyed it and awarded you six stars for your effort. Thank you. Jacqueline
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Hello My Friend,
This is a true story from a nurse at a hospital clinic. She treats me, sometimes three times a week. Who doesn*t love a cat under stress and duress! Danielle had to take a day off when Bamboo returned. She with a Vet nursed Bamboo back to health. He?s anxious for another visit to the ravine!
Thanx for the six-pak!
-Lobber
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My pleasure. Have a fantastic life. Jacqueline
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love your story in a poem Lobber. You told well, Bamboo's 2 weeks of freedom in the wilds of the woodlands before returning home to the one that loves him. Beautifully presented, and good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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I love your story in a poem Lobber. You told well, Bamboo's 2 weeks of freedom in the wilds of the woodlands before returning home to the one that loves him. Beautifully presented, and good luck in the contest. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Hello My Friend,
Who doesn?t love a cat under stress and duress. This is a recent true story from a nurse at a hospital clinic who treats me, sometimes three times a week. She had to take a day off when Bamboo returned.
-Lobber
- Lobber
