Operation Jasmine
Fictional account of the assassination of a monster16 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow! What a creative tale you have crafted. Congratulations on your well deserved win of the Assassination contest. Your succinct choice of words tells a compelling and almost believable story. The details are clear and the story flows in a way that maintains the reader's interest. The ending, though not surprising, is clever, and a bit humorous. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Wow! What a creative tale you have crafted. Congratulations on your well deserved win of the Assassination contest. Your succinct choice of words tells a compelling and almost believable story. The details are clear and the story flows in a way that maintains the reader's interest. The ending, though not surprising, is clever, and a bit humorous. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Thanks so much for your review and sound analysis of the story!! Really appreciated!!!
Comment from BethShelby
Nicely done. An assisination thriller using real background of what is in the present day news. No wonder this is a contest winner. Congratulation on you win. I enjoyed it. I wish he was eliminated for real.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Nicely done. An assisination thriller using real background of what is in the present day news. No wonder this is a contest winner. Congratulation on you win. I enjoyed it. I wish he was eliminated for real.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thanks so much for your kind review and wishes. I hope someone will get him soon!!
Comment from pome lover
that is well written and too bad it isn't true. Putin is indeed a monster.
Our President, on the other hand, is killing us without firing a shot.
At any rate, congratulations on your well deserved win!
Katharine
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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that is well written and too bad it isn't true. Putin is indeed a monster.
Our President, on the other hand, is killing us without firing a shot.
At any rate, congratulations on your well deserved win!
Katharine
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you Katharine!!!
Comment from LisaMay
Congratulations on your win with this very well told story, culminating in what most of the decent people in the world wish for. I just hope Leila wasn't injured by flying flowers.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Congratulations on your win with this very well told story, culminating in what most of the decent people in the world wish for. I just hope Leila wasn't injured by flying flowers.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Ha ha... I'm sure she escape from the flower shards!!!
Congratulations yourself, for "The pond awakens". I have read it. You so deserve your top place!!!
Thanks for the kind review! We'll meet in another contest maybe...?
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Thanks for your comments... we're bound to meet elsewhere if the contest prompt is worth our attention.
Comment from Lisasview
Hello there, "blind" poet....
Well, this is quite a story...very well written as I read through it I really found no errors in grammar or punctation.
Your story is inviting and very intriguing.
I really liked it and wish you the very best in the contest,
Lisasview, new to this site
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Hello there, "blind" poet....
Well, this is quite a story...very well written as I read through it I really found no errors in grammar or punctation.
Your story is inviting and very intriguing.
I really liked it and wish you the very best in the contest,
Lisasview, new to this site
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you Lisa...I read and commented on your post too, and I'm one of your fan, LOL...
I really appreciate your kind review!!
Comment from Ulla
Hahaha, oh I wish! And indeed, what a waste of flowers. I really liked this wee story, very real to what is having the world. I wish you the best of luck with this little gem. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Hahaha, oh I wish! And indeed, what a waste of flowers. I really liked this wee story, very real to what is having the world. I wish you the best of luck with this little gem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Ulla, for your kind review!! I wish it were true too!!!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This read smooth like a chapter out of a top-selling crime novel; full of suspense, great imagery, great ending. I think you created a wonderful thriller and will do very well in the contest. Am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Gale
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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This read smooth like a chapter out of a top-selling crime novel; full of suspense, great imagery, great ending. I think you created a wonderful thriller and will do very well in the contest. Am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Gale
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review!! Really appreciate it!!
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I thoroughly enjoyed it. You're so welcome.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice writing. Good work.
I like your politics, though that has nothing to do with either my review, or my vote.
The plot is believable. The picture at the end of the story is superb.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Nice writing. Good work.
I like your politics, though that has nothing to do with either my review, or my vote.
The plot is believable. The picture at the end of the story is superb.
Good luck.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Wayne, for your kind review!!
Comment from lyenochka
You did a great job creating a believable scene. It's refreshing to put Putin in India and have the right agents at the right place at the right time. Of course, considering his recent deeds, Putin would be a target that most readers would agree with. Good use of suspense! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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You did a great job creating a believable scene. It's refreshing to put Putin in India and have the right agents at the right place at the right time. Of course, considering his recent deeds, Putin would be a target that most readers would agree with. Good use of suspense! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review!!
Comment from Wendy G
Well done. A good plot. Original and creative and leaving the clear outcome at the end to the reader's imagination. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Well done. A good plot. Original and creative and leaving the clear outcome at the end to the reader's imagination. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review, Wendy!!
