Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This chapter based on love was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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My Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023

Thank you Doctor. I am improving with comments and studying writing videos etc. It is a controversial topic today which should not be, I am trying to promote love between human beings and nothing else as you have noticed. I appreciate your comments and rating very much. I hope you will read all chapters.All the best.
Arun

Comment from JSD

Excellent

My goodness, what a tale. Scarily graphic and strangely moving. I'm glad there is room for all on this site, having just received a review that attacked such things! Well done to you for having the strength to write this.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023

As a author, one has to be free of fears of rejections. Religious fanatics and unenlightened individual have no capabilities to understand life and creation. For me, transgender is accepted in my religion and people have special status as harbingers of good omen. They play important role in auspicious occasions like celebration of a birth and marriage. Our epics have warriors who were born female but underwent gender change to become male.
I appreciate your comments and ratings. Thanks and please read all chapters posted in my portfolio.