Nature's Voice
Nature speaks to us if we will only listen2 total reviews
Comment from Lisasview
Oh, that is such a lovely thought...... Love your image that goes along very well with your poem.....
Good luck in the contest,
Lisasview, new to this site..............................
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Oh, that is such a lovely thought...... Love your image that goes along very well with your poem.....
Good luck in the contest,
Lisasview, new to this site..............................
Comment Written 26-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A neatly worded verse and an enjoyable read in this 3-5-3 accurately counted verse form. I like the way you've personified the trees, adding a sense of wonderment to your poem. This is of course optional but personally I would lose the capital letters. This is very acceptable and would enhance flow which is always important, especially in a message with this gentle breeze theme. Your verse fits the brief well. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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A neatly worded verse and an enjoyable read in this 3-5-3 accurately counted verse form. I like the way you've personified the trees, adding a sense of wonderment to your poem. This is of course optional but personally I would lose the capital letters. This is very acceptable and would enhance flow which is always important, especially in a message with this gentle breeze theme. Your verse fits the brief well. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Thank you! I will look into that.
