Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

More cake for everyone then, right?! (though old guys don't eat a lot I've noticed...)

Fun and amusing entry. I bet you're a contender with this one! Good luck in the polls.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023

Thank you.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a fun flash and so difficult to get anything into such limited word count. Love the humour and the fact that you've expressed it all in dialogue with a very fitting image. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023

Thank you. It was a fun challange

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! I like it. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023

Thank you. I'm so glad you like it.