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Build a sandcastle that lasts
3 total reviews
Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
This reminded me of sand castles I had built in my lifetime. I grew up in Long Island, NY, as a teen, near South Hampton, which is more well known. I've made so many sand castles, with family and friends, that seeing one photo can immediately bring back memories. Excellent writing!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
Thanks very much - glad it brought back some memories :)
Comment from
JSD
Great picture to accompany a clever musing on the lasting effects of our careful castle building. The rocks of course have more permanence. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
Great, thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from
kahpot
Very well said, no matter how many times we fall we keep on building to achieve something permanent, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2023
Great, thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
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