Wow I Feel Good
like I knew I would (title taken from a James Brown song)3 total reviews
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This is a really good poem. Acrostics are sometimes difficult to write in and of themselves, but you not only wrote an acrostic, you even made it rhyme! That is impressive.
My only suggestion would be to skip a line between each word. That would make it easier to see the acrostic, in my opinion. Otherwise, don't change a thing! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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This is a really good poem. Acrostics are sometimes difficult to write in and of themselves, but you not only wrote an acrostic, you even made it rhyme! That is impressive.
My only suggestion would be to skip a line between each word. That would make it easier to see the acrostic, in my opinion. Otherwise, don't change a thing! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Thank you. All those stars are something else that make me feel good. I'm glad you like my poem that much, and I see what you mean about the spacing, but I guess I'll have to wait until the after the voting is done to look into changing it,
Comment from Nicki Nance
What a fun application of James Brown's iconic words to an acrostic Your message is sweet and your lines flow seamlessly. Thanks for an uplifting read.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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What a fun application of James Brown's iconic words to an acrostic Your message is sweet and your lines flow seamlessly. Thanks for an uplifting read.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Thank you for an uplifting review. I've had that song stuck in my head all day,
Comment from Sally Law
This is a FanStory fanstatic love poem and in words that are not so high faultin' we can't understand them. Delightfully giddy love poem.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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This is a FanStory fanstatic love poem and in words that are not so high faultin' we can't understand them. Delightfully giddy love poem.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
Comment Written 29-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2023
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Thank you. I felt like I was stealing from one of my generation's favorite artists but after listening to the song all day, I couldn't resist.
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James Brown?
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U-wZa6RZgQA james brown
