Chocolate Catastrophe
Nonfiction story for the contest12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
Wow! What an end to your story. I can see poking around stores where the price tags are a bit heavy. The incident with the chocolate would likely make the ship seem like rowboat and everyone there to observe. Funny (now) story.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Wow! What an end to your story. I can see poking around stores where the price tags are a bit heavy. The incident with the chocolate would likely make the ship seem like rowboat and everyone there to observe. Funny (now) story.
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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I?m glad you found this story entertaining. I will be giving jewelry shops a wide berth in the future! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from JSD
Chocolate diamonds? Sound tasty. An amusing little tale and I think the store deserved to have the drink spilled. The salesman sounds rather up himself. Well written and entertaining.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Chocolate diamonds? Sound tasty. An amusing little tale and I think the store deserved to have the drink spilled. The salesman sounds rather up himself. Well written and entertaining.
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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I?m glad you found this story entertaining. I will be giving jewelry shops a wide berth in the future! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
