The Bride
A story about a brides thoughts and feelings before she walk16 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so glad to see you sharing from your life and I loved the honest tentativeness as every bride must have some questions about taking this momentous step that leads to "the rest of her life." Loved the descriptions in your post!
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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I'm so glad to see you sharing from your life and I loved the honest tentativeness as every bride must have some questions about taking this momentous step that leads to "the rest of her life." Loved the descriptions in your post!
Comment Written 10-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewingg. I appreciate the many stars. Have aa blessd day.
Comment from Ulla
I came across this wonderfully written story and it drew me in. I think you express a bride's doubt so very well. I can understand her last minute angst. I hope it will a lifelong union. They get rarer and rarer. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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I came across this wonderfully written story and it drew me in. I think you express a bride's doubt so very well. I can understand her last minute angst. I hope it will a lifelong union. They get rarer and rarer. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from MissMerri
I thought this was beautifully done. The descriptions were so vivid and made me feel as if I were right there inside your head. It was a lovely and comfortable place to be. Thanks for the treat. MM
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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I thought this was beautifully done. The descriptions were so vivid and made me feel as if I were right there inside your head. It was a lovely and comfortable place to be. Thanks for the treat. MM
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. The six stars are wonderful. Have a blessed day.
Comment from JSD
A lovely little tale of the nerves before the wedding, before taking a step that will hopefully last a lifetime. Well done for communicating this so successfully and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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A lovely little tale of the nerves before the wedding, before taking a step that will hopefully last a lifetime. Well done for communicating this so successfully and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thankyou for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from evilynne
Your story is lovely, from the description of the bride's attire to the description to the bride's uncertainties. The story is well written right to its happy ending. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Your story is lovely, from the description of the bride's attire to the description to the bride's uncertainties. The story is well written right to its happy ending. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from Douglas Goff
#notme
My wife was all in on our wedding day. She ran down the aisle hurdling children while screaming "I Do" (Well, at least that's how I remember it)
Good writing. I found no errors. I think you captured the moment well. Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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#notme
My wife was all in on our wedding day. She ran down the aisle hurdling children while screaming "I Do" (Well, at least that's how I remember it)
Good writing. I found no errors. I think you captured the moment well. Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from Lisasview
Hello mystery writer...
I loved this... I sort of thought (but would be too many words) that she would be arm in arm with her father because she most likely would not be walking down the walkway with out someone to give her away?
But ... as I said I so loved this!!
Lisasview, new to this site
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Hello mystery writer...
I loved this... I sort of thought (but would be too many words) that she would be arm in arm with her father because she most likely would not be walking down the walkway with out someone to give her away?
But ... as I said I so loved this!!
Lisasview, new to this site
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from Andrea Kepple
Good job communicating what the bride is feeling as she is about to walk down the aisle and change her life. It's one of those moments where there is the before and then there is the after.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Good job communicating what the bride is feeling as she is about to walk down the aisle and change her life. It's one of those moments where there is the before and then there is the after.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is a scary-accurate portrayal of the moments before the first strains of The Bridal Chorus sound. It's that terrifying feeling of leaping in the abyss, and you captured it perfectly! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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This is a scary-accurate portrayal of the moments before the first strains of The Bridal Chorus sound. It's that terrifying feeling of leaping in the abyss, and you captured it perfectly! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like the way you have allowed yourself in the beginning to imagine another you before stepping back into the "bridal finery." This flash is all about your mind trying to focus but being distracted by thoughts and sights reinforcing the importance of this day. It's a lovely human touch so that your prose isn't swamped in too much idealistic sentiment. You pack a lot into this and you do it skilfully and engagingly (if you excuse the pun!) Good luck in the contest, Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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I like the way you have allowed yourself in the beginning to imagine another you before stepping back into the "bridal finery." This flash is all about your mind trying to focus but being distracted by thoughts and sights reinforcing the importance of this day. It's a lovely human touch so that your prose isn't swamped in too much idealistic sentiment. You pack a lot into this and you do it skilfully and engagingly (if you excuse the pun!) Good luck in the contest, Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2023
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
