Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

I love this version using fairy tails. You hit the theme on the head. I love the opening line, got me wondering where the story was headed. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023

Thank you for the fantastic review, Andrea. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.

=]

Ron

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I really liked and enjoyed this piece. i like a good subversive take on traditional matter and this hits all the right notes.

Good stuff
GMG

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023

Thank you for the great review, GMG. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

Ron

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Really cleverly written, on the Roald Dahl Revolting Rhymes theme. Love the repeated interjection of rhyme at key moments. And the end is superb. Well done for this inventive writing.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

Thank you for the great review, John. I appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.