Birth of Wildflowers
The role birds play in the life of wildflowers.5 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful for the prompt you penned. Beautiful and descriptive words and very lovely art work you chose to go with your work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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This is a very beautiful for the prompt you penned. Beautiful and descriptive words and very lovely art work you chose to go with your work. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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Thanks for your read and taking time to provide feedback.
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You are so welcome!!! Terry
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem Contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem Contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Love your quote. Also thank you for the read and the positive feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! A concise, efficient explanation of how flowers can get transported by the other creatures in nature. And what a perfect picture you found to accompany it, too!
I can see this doing well in the contest. Good luck to you!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! A concise, efficient explanation of how flowers can get transported by the other creatures in nature. And what a perfect picture you found to accompany it, too!
I can see this doing well in the contest. Good luck to you!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Thanks for taking the time to read and provide positive feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from JSD
A nice bit of alliteration to enhance this very successful 5-7-5 syllabic box. You pack a great deal in here and it deserves to do well in the competition. Good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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A nice bit of alliteration to enhance this very successful 5-7-5 syllabic box. You pack a great deal in here and it deserves to do well in the competition. Good luck.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thanks for your encouraging feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from Anne Theriault
So THAT's how I can grow flowers...just feed wildflower seed to birds. Maybe they can grow what I can't seem to. This poem has the passing of time written into it, which grants it more depth. It's interesting that the seeds themselves are "winged" -- you can just see them being transported in the belly of the birds. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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So THAT's how I can grow flowers...just feed wildflower seed to birds. Maybe they can grow what I can't seem to. This poem has the passing of time written into it, which grants it more depth. It's interesting that the seeds themselves are "winged" -- you can just see them being transported in the belly of the birds. Nice poem.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023
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Thanks for the read and feedback. I think it would be difficult to train birds to drop seeds on your patch of ground. But good luck :) Winged meaning carried by the birds.