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The Lioness of Shadi

Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Sharp as Arrows"
A fantasy adventure out of antiquity

2 total reviews 
Comment from JSD
Excellent
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Jeez. What an incredible piece of writing. Your narrative is utterly compelling and your description and dialogue make it the more so. Your ending makes the reader long for the next part. Well done!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate the time you gave it and the kind words. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Ricky1024
Excellent
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This Milestone was well written Richardson as well as an imagery.
It read well and slowed well with no grammar issues.
My complete synopsis:
The objective and objective contents were both excellent and exceptional while descriptive measures aligned perfectly

Thanks for sharing and have a blessed new day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2023

reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate the time you gave it and the kind words. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.