Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery, rhyme, and humor
with plays on words.
-You start with a good question,
and show how you encourage tulips to grow.
-Then offer "water in sips."
-Hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Jul-2023

You are welcome. It was a fun poem. I like someone with a sense of humor!

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

From your two lips, tulips!! Very cute. And I can't believe you found the absolutely PERFECT picture to go along with your fun words. I can see this doing well in the polls. Good luck to you!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023

Thank you. I hope so!

Comment from jacquelyn popp

Excellent

What a sweet and very nice poem. The flow of your words, and rhyming, great job. Very clever of how you used tulips and two lips. That was creative. Nicely done. The picture went perfectly with your poem. Tulips are one of my favorite flowers along with roses. I love the colors of them. Your poem is a very nice contest entry and I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

Thank you. I actually took it from a larger poem and I end by growing roses!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Very neat 5-7-5 verse with rhyme and a nice play on words with 'tulips' and 'two lips.' I enjoyed this and the gardening advice! Good luck in the contest! Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2023

Thank you and I appreciate the encouragement.