America
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Comment from Sanku
powerful statement .The world id full of liars .And we poor 'common people are fed lies'.
I am surprised to find a clip from WioN. Palki is avery effective presenter...
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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powerful statement .The world id full of liars .And we poor 'common people are fed lies'.
I am surprised to find a clip from WioN. Palki is avery effective presenter...
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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I like her videos..she is thorough.
Also, I'm European and I don't take what America spouts as gospel.
I do my homework (wink)
Keep Safe!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is eye-catching and quite creepy, relevant of course to many in our society who seek to spread lies and misinformation in powerfully influential ways! Unfortunately your middle line has only 6 syllables so would be disqualified. Regrettably, I can't therefore give it the 5* at the moment but will happily revise this if you can amend and come back to me. (Easy to put a 1-syllable adjective in there I think). Thanks Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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This is eye-catching and quite creepy, relevant of course to many in our society who seek to spread lies and misinformation in powerfully influential ways! Unfortunately your middle line has only 6 syllables so would be disqualified. Regrettably, I can't therefore give it the 5* at the moment but will happily revise this if you can amend and come back to me. (Easy to put a 1-syllable adjective in there I think). Thanks Debbie
Comment Written 10-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2023
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Yes,
I could but the word fire ( I googled and re-checked) can also be counted as two syllables so I will leave it.
Before posting,I used the site: Haiku Count and it counted FIRE as two syllables.
I appreciate the concern. (smile)
Stay safe!