Freedom to Choose Our Options
Encouraged to be original, but expected to fit in as a copy5 total reviews
Comment from Paul Manton
Hi, Reso. I don't think we've met before. I'm Paul, and I'm looking forward to being your reviewer for the next few minutes.
Ooops! Looks like you were a jaywalker, or didn't look or listen - much to your discomfort - and possible injury.
In my first review this morning ( around 06.30 BST from London) I was telling a story of my actually slipping over on a banana skin (yes, of course you may laugh) - but this was at a busy junction at Oxford Circus in Central London. Far from laughing, five concerned people rushed to my aid, brushed me down and checked I was OK. A triumph for the human race!
But what have you done here Res? Could that be your umbrella, left behind as they cart you off in an ambulance?
Yes, you will pay, and without insurance, this could be an unlucky day indeed!
A great 3-liner. Thank you.
Paul
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Hi, Reso. I don't think we've met before. I'm Paul, and I'm looking forward to being your reviewer for the next few minutes.
Ooops! Looks like you were a jaywalker, or didn't look or listen - much to your discomfort - and possible injury.
In my first review this morning ( around 06.30 BST from London) I was telling a story of my actually slipping over on a banana skin (yes, of course you may laugh) - but this was at a busy junction at Oxford Circus in Central London. Far from laughing, five concerned people rushed to my aid, brushed me down and checked I was OK. A triumph for the human race!
But what have you done here Res? Could that be your umbrella, left behind as they cart you off in an ambulance?
Yes, you will pay, and without insurance, this could be an unlucky day indeed!
A great 3-liner. Thank you.
Paul
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Paul, thank you for this fun to read whimsical and much appreciated comment and feedback. I have never felt so relatable to someone as I do with your imagination and imagery. I need to friend you for sure!
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Please be my buddy, Reso.
It would be an honor.
Paul
Comment from JSD
An excellent six syllables underlining an important issue and idea about society and the lives we live in society. Well done and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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An excellent six syllables underlining an important issue and idea about society and the lives we live in society. Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You cannot allow freedom and then was to censor it. I heard that this is what is happening in America which is no longer the land of the free, a poignant write, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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You cannot allow freedom and then was to censor it. I heard that this is what is happening in America which is no longer the land of the free, a poignant write, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thanks for the feedback, Dolly.
Comment from Nicki Nance
I like the message of the 242, and your comments are compelling. I fear if they all unmasked, we might find nothing - which would still be better than what most of those masks cover.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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I like the message of the 242, and your comments are compelling. I fear if they all unmasked, we might find nothing - which would still be better than what most of those masks cover.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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Thank you for taking time to offer this feedback, Nicki, it means more than you know!
Comment from Loretta Bigg
Nice entry for this contest. It says what it wants to say and nothing is unnecessary. I don't really like the font as it gets in the way of reading but it is my only negative criticism.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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Nice entry for this contest. It says what it wants to say and nothing is unnecessary. I don't really like the font as it gets in the way of reading but it is my only negative criticism.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2023
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Changing it now! Appreciate the feedback so much!
