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The Saga of Procrastination

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Comment from Soledadpaz
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Funny take on good intentions and human nature. I argue with myself as well sometimes. We always want to do what's good for us, but procrastination gets in the way so often.

Sol

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2023

Comment from Kerry Foley
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Lol. No worries of the length it was quite entertaining and funny, reminding me exactly like myself I don't think anybody's a bigger, procrastinator than me. It's so funny, I literally do the same thing and pin notes all over on the fridge. I still don't see them or do them .
This paragraph was hilarious
Well, it's a mother fucker prophecy, it might go according to the plan, it might not. Everything is in God's hands. So, the chance of it happening is like fifty-fifty."

at least you get out of the house and make it places. I feel like Sheila on shameless it's a series. She never wanted to leave the house. That's me. I'll put on my coat I'll get dressed I may even get in my car and then say no not today. Haha.
I scheduled my yoga with my TV. I put it on all the time I haven't quite started yet ha ha.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful and witty story.

I try and go about the law of attraction in this universe. Murphy's Law always intervenes. Lol

-Kerry

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
    Hi Kerry, thank you so much for taking the time to read my little rant:) and you know everything is the truth and only truth and it happens everyday:) for example, right now instead of applying for a job that is due tonight I'm on Fanstory:)
reply by Kerry Foley on 20-Nov-2023
    Lol I get it , same here. Well, it is almost 1 AM here so that's my excuse to not doing anything at the moment ha ha
Comment from Wendyanne
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Lol I am always procrastinating! I found your story quite amusing and an enjoyable read. It's so difficult to summon up the energy to do things especially if we work full time. Thanks for the chuckle

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
    Hi Wendy:) I do work full time at one job, and part time at the other, because cats and travelling is expensive:)
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This was very funny!! It could have gone on further and I would have happily read it again. I wrote about Procrastination in High School, then again in college. No joke, I just did. lol I didn't want you to expect a joke, but Im a terrible procrastinator so I could relate to this. Maybe the most creative people procrastinate, waiting for that idea. This is very appealing withe the color divisions and images. I am sure many will enjoy this as I have enjoyed it!

Have a good day!

Alex :)

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
    Hi Alex, mmm there is no cure for this :)
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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That Murphy's law likes to mess around. Totally and completely mess with your head messed with your stuff messed with your appointments, mess with your vehicles, everything.
But then there are days that murphy doesn't show up at all. I enjoyed this quite a bit. I also enjoyed the changing of font colors makes it very easy to keep track of who's doing what. I think your characters are believable.
And you're store line very engaging. I see no issues with grammar esthetics. Some sentence structure subject matter. It's a great right great reef and awesome significant. Hope you have a great night!

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
    Hi Lea, thank you so much for your encouraging review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This sounds similar to a regular conversation I have with myself when I don't want to go and exercise. I think of all the excuses in the book but what remains is the fact that I am getting lazy. I then tell myself to get out there and do it. On the way home I tell myself I am a hero and I wallow in self praise. This is a my true story Iza. I enjoyed yours very much, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
    Hi Dolly, sorry for my delay, I am juggling with work and trying to post something on Fan Stroy from time to time... and the other events that recently happened in my life.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I'm sitting here thinking I really should go for my walk, but it's raining...
Take an umbrella ... No, it's windy... There's a light breeze...
If it stops, I'll have a dripping wet 'brolly to carry ... Put a raincoat and hat on... No, it's too nice to wear out in the rain, it might ruin it...
Wait until it stops raining... Good idea!

I loved your 'chat to yourself' Iza, I do that all the time! So, do you think there is a Procrastitis Pandemic happening? Perhaps we should all stay home! LOL. I loved your chat, my friend. Not too long at all. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
    Good idea I should start a rant about that too:)
Comment from estory
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Chocked full of personality, as always, and the wit and witicisms we have come to expect from you. I like how you have this argument with yourself and in listening to it unfold, we see all the different ways in which you look at the world around you. estory

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    Thank you so much for your encouragement:)
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Nice work.
or better tackling myself in doing things. - huh? talking?
I'm not sure that a single class of Zumba or Aquafit would do anything anyway, so you did the right thing. (except maybe all the work not getting your hair wet while swimming when you were going to wash it anyway) smiley face here

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    Thanks:) I used to stay in the gym for hours. Now, since my second job it's at this gym, I don't feel it anymore:)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing. I did enjoy reading and smiled as I read. I can understand what you said. It all makes perfectly good sense to me. LOl I'm only a part time procrastinator.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    So jealous, just part time:) I am full time:) there is no cure at all.