Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Ginda dear, this is a scream! Sorry to have missed this. Writing has become more difficult, thus my reviewing has fallen behind. I'm glad this did well in the contest. Congratulations!

Anyone that makes us laugh deserves a ribbon and FanStory cashola. :))

Sending you my best today too.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thanks so much, Sally. Glad it gave you a laugh.

Comment from Julie Lau

Excellent

Very cute - and I know a few ladies that this has happened to; with one, a mischievous new husband was the cause. Luckily they lived on an isolated property, but even so...

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

She did eventually return with their clothes, but we still laugh about this.

Comment from patricia dillon

Excellent

This sounds like a genuine memory. What a pickle! I hope you found your clothes. You very cleverly incorporate all the requisite words and it does not sound at all forced. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

Thanks, Patricia, especially for commenting that it does not sound forced, as that is the goal here. I appreciate your reviewing my poem.

reply by patricia dillon on 18-Jul-2023

You're welcome

Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

I love your poem. The picture is a sweet addition to the poem. I love the story and how you were able to incorporate the images into the poem as it flowed along.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

Thank you, Andrea, for reviewing my poem. I appreciate your comments.

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

While it was not funny at the time, it certainly is now and in a delightful, well, rhymed poem.
The picture you choose certainly completes the hilarious story.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thanks, Mary. Glad you enjoy the mischief.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Heh heh, I guess that will teach the two "naughty" sisters a lesson, when you have a sister who doesn't like taking her clothes off, she may well teach you a lessin! Beautifully written my friend, an excellent post, congratulations, on your 100th, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thanks, Roy. It was fun to revisit this memory in poetry form.

reply by royowen on 16-Jul-2023

Well done

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, this is a fun day out and you made me smile, congrats on your 100th post and you entertained me with this presentation, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thanks, Dolly, glad their mischief entertained you.

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Great poem, like lovely and fitting ending. Skinny dipping is always fun. Congratulations on your milestone post.

I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Keep up the good work. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thanks, Jacqueline. It was fun to revisit this memory in poetry form.

Comment from Theresa Honnigford

Excellent

Congratulations on your milestone post. This was an entertaining work. The image was appropriate. Chosen rhyme scheme worked well. Wonderful. Thanks, Theresa H.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023

Thanks, Theresa, for reviewing my poem. It was fun to revisit this memory in poetry form.

reply by Theresa Honnigford on 16-Jul-2023

Welcome.