Soaring Eagle
Eaglets Will Feast Tonight22 total reviews
Comment from Angel Debbie
The beauty of the sky along with the hunger of the bird all in a few sweet lines. And hunger no more. I love your writing.
Thank you for sharing, greatly appreciated.
Have a wonderful week!
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023
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The beauty of the sky along with the hunger of the bird all in a few sweet lines. And hunger no more. I love your writing.
Thank you for sharing, greatly appreciated.
Have a wonderful week!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023
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You are a true angel: you praised my little poem so much and showered me with stars...
I'm so appreciative and you inspire me to be better.
Thank you!!!
Comment from Eleri
This poem describes well what birds of prey do and has the correct number of syllables per line for the contest - well done. I like the idea of the day turning to gold and the alliteration of 'gold, glides and grace'.
Good luck with it
Eleri
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023
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This poem describes well what birds of prey do and has the correct number of syllables per line for the contest - well done. I like the idea of the day turning to gold and the alliteration of 'gold, glides and grace'.
Good luck with it
Eleri
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023
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Thank you Eleri, for your positive review and generous stars!!!
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! The author's words are nature based and go well with the theme
of this poem. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! The author's words are nature based and go well with the theme
of this poem. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much for your positive review!!!
Comment from royowen
The eagle is a bird of prey,,and also a symbol of nobility and grace, and the bald Eagle. it's the symbol of the US. This is beautifully written my friend, Ann excellent entry, well done, good luck blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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The eagle is a bird of prey,,and also a symbol of nobility and grace, and the bald Eagle. it's the symbol of the US. This is beautifully written my friend, Ann excellent entry, well done, good luck blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2023
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Thanks so much again, Roy, for your review!!!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem for the prompt. It is bold and to the point. The whole presentation supports the meaning, and it brings the reader into a flight with the eagle. Excellent writing! Best wishes!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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This is an excellent poem for the prompt. It is bold and to the point. The whole presentation supports the meaning, and it brings the reader into a flight with the eagle. Excellent writing! Best wishes!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much Alex, for your so kind and constructive review!! As always,
Love you and love your work ❤️
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yes, your soaring eagle is most majestic. As the golden day ends, the raptor seeks its a la carte dinner.
The font size IMHO is much too large. Not sure (but it is your preference) that you need initial caps for each line. Consider using a serif font to improve your presentation value to other FS reviewers.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Yes, your soaring eagle is most majestic. As the golden day ends, the raptor seeks its a la carte dinner.
The font size IMHO is much too large. Not sure (but it is your preference) that you need initial caps for each line. Consider using a serif font to improve your presentation value to other FS reviewers.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Hey Mark!
Advice taken. I will try the serif and see how it works out. Thank you for your great review!!!
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful photo and true words capturing the moment perfectly. I like the contrast in the third line where the beauty of the scene is changed to terror for the victim. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Beautiful photo and true words capturing the moment perfectly. I like the contrast in the third line where the beauty of the scene is changed to terror for the victim. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much Wendy, and I take this opportunity to Sincerely CONGRATULATE you for your recent win. I read it, it was so deserving.!!
SuperMario
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Thank you very much Mario. That is lovely of you and I appreciate it.
Wendy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh my! This is like a fake-then-knock-out-punch. Here I am thinking, "Oh, how peaceful and serene and beautiful!" Next thing I know, I'm reading about swooping in for a kill. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Oh my! This is like a fake-then-knock-out-punch. Here I am thinking, "Oh, how peaceful and serene and beautiful!" Next thing I know, I'm reading about swooping in for a kill. Nicely done.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thanks, Rachelle, for this nice review!!!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt contest. I like the presentation. Concrete words' imagery is easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the juxtaposition of nature's beauty and savagery of killing... although is part of the cycle of life.
Good luck!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry writing prompt contest. I like the presentation. Concrete words' imagery is easy to visualize. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the juxtaposition of nature's beauty and savagery of killing... although is part of the cycle of life.
Good luck!
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you Gypsy, for the in-depth review. Really motivates me to do better!!!
Comment from LisaMay
That's a gorgeous photo of the sea eagle to go with your evocative words that capture the beauty and danger of nature in action. You've set the scene, introduced the noble bird, then turned it edgy with death. Tranquility suddenly turns dramatic.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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That's a gorgeous photo of the sea eagle to go with your evocative words that capture the beauty and danger of nature in action. You've set the scene, introduced the noble bird, then turned it edgy with death. Tranquility suddenly turns dramatic.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thanks so much Lisa for your very detailed and helpful review. I do appreciate the generous stars too.
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My pleasure. I enjoyed your poem.
